Love WIP take 2
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Wow. This is a very challenging composition. Really well done. Would love to see how it develops further.
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@xin-li i do too
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More updated sketch. Blarg would have done more but so tired from work. I hate working retail.
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@Aleksey This is looking really good. I know them retail blues :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:
If I might; for the meter on the last two lines, would you consider:
"Even quicker than it starts,
May strongest bonds be pulled apart”
just a suggestion
I love the witch character. It's like she's pulled out of out fairy tales...or mayby from some Terry Pratchett novel -
@Kris being compared to terry pratchet books??
And ty for the suggestion that does sound good but i wanna emphasize rhyme just because it’s fun -
@Aleksey This is looking fanatastic, really great work!
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This is looking amazing! Love the composition and the poem. Plus that little cat.
Keep up the great work!
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This is looking good. I love the 50things projects so I’m routing for you to make it happen. Good luck on the contest. This is already one of my favorites.
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@burvantill awww you guys are soo greatt you made me feel better! (Im at work on a Saturday when the trains arent running so I appreciate you all for the messages and upvotes)
The real struggle is gonna be fitting stuff on those back shelves. I might instead do stuff hanging on the wall instead of shelved objects.
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Ok here’s a rough sketch of it before I do inks
Gonna get rid of that extra lantern and put something Else there
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@Aleksey awesome! I love it!
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@Aleksey Wow, this is awesome!
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@inkandspatter @mag thanks! It’s coming along pretty well. Coloring it is gonna be a nightmare but I’m excited
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Whew. Alrighty here is the inked version pre value and color. Gonna take a break for a little bit and work on my building backgrounds homework. I counted and successfully did 50 different things!
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Here’s what the values will be, sorta maybe.
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This looks amazing! I absolutely love all the little bits and bobs you've managed to squeeze into the composition, it works really well!
Sorry i'm so late in suggesting this, the smoke coming out of the cauldron looks wispy but the heart itself is a cloud of smoke, maybe the heart should also be wispy as you wouldn't have two types of smoke? Only a suggestion anyway!
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@hannahmccaffery hmm i kinda want that effect but i think i can make it look better now that you mention it, ty
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Line work and composition look great. Love all the details you've stuck in.
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Niiiiiiiice
I think this is gonna turn out pretty awesome
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It's really coming together strong. I'm looking forward to the color.