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    • braden H
      braden H last edited by

      And done with this for the day. I'll see how far I can get tomorrow.

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      • Coley
        Coley last edited by

        I liked number two best as well! you certainly captured that intimidating feel of this situation, great storytelling of that moment before 😉

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        • ArtofAleksey
          ArtofAleksey @braden H last edited by

          @Braden-Hallett ooo I like the water reflection nice touch.

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          • JerrySketchyArt
            JerrySketchyArt last edited by

            You are flying through this one! Looks great so far. Can't wait to see the final.

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            • burvantill
              burvantill Moderator @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett make it a Hawaiian shirt with floral print. Lol!

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              • davidhohn
                davidhohn SVS Instructor Pro last edited by

                Scrolling through this thread was so fun! Great keywords, solid feedback from everyone in the forums!

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                • braden H
                  braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                  @Aleksey Thanks! Happy accident 🙂

                  @burvantill but then he would just be a crazy old man with a whistle waving angrily at a child on a diving board 🙂 Maybe that's better, actually! 😄

                  @davidhohn Thanks! Really tryin' to put that turbocharging course to work 🙂

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                  • braden H
                    braden H last edited by

                    Allrighty. From here I fiddle and paint!

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                    • Dima Eichhorn
                      Dima Eichhorn @braden H last edited by

                      @Braden-Hallett 3, or 1 if the man behind is going to kick the person.😋 gread idea.

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                      • Heather Boyd
                        Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

                        @Braden-Hallett I just noticed your character's elbows- cinnamon rolls -lols.

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                        • ArtofAleksey
                          ArtofAleksey @Heather Boyd last edited by

                          @Heather-Boyd I was just thinking that!

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                          • steph_artist
                            steph_artist last edited by

                            So cool to see your progressions with this piece. My eye is really drawn to the character on the diving board. Not an easy viewpoint to create.

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                            • ?
                              A Former User last edited by

                              @Braden-Hallett Fantastic work so far. I'd probably add a touch of light/halo around the kid on the diving board. I feel like he's getting a tiny bit lost in that deep blue sky?

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                                @Heather-Boyd @Aleksey There's just somethin' about elbows that scream swirly cinnamon rolls to me 🙂

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                                • braden H
                                  braden H @Guest last edited by

                                  @lovetherobot Interesting! I may try that. To me at the moment he looks like he contrasts a bit too (almost vibrating)

                                  Thanks for the feedback 🙂

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                                  • ?
                                    A Former User last edited by

                                    This looks amazing 😮 😮 😮 that water reflection and the colours are just brilliant and the boys face on the diving board is SO good and he really stands out! 😃 You're so good at drawing sides of faces, that's something i struggle with, but your swimming teacher's moustache is fab haha!

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                                    • lenwen
                                      lenwen @braden H last edited by

                                      @Braden-Hallett wow this is amazing! I can feel the depth and the fear of the character. Looking forward for more

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                                      • braden H
                                        braden H @Guest last edited by

                                        @hannahmccaffery I was struggling to think of props that would make a character the 'coach' and for some reason a bushy moustache just seemed appropriate 🙂

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                                        • braden H
                                          braden H last edited by

                                          Work continues! I'm sure I'll think of things to fiddle and fix as the month goes along 🙂

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                                          • bnewman
                                            bnewman @braden H last edited by

                                            @Braden-Hallett This is way cool. I love seeing your process. Very helpful of you to share!

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