Does this comic page work in black and white

[burvantill]

@Braden-Hallett the black/white reads much better with the new changes.

[JerrySketchyArt]

@Braden-Hallett Much easier to read. Good job adjusting!

[avfarrar]

Oh, yeah. Making the castle lighter really helps the image clarity. "Nicooooole" is also easier to understand. This page looks great!

[ArtofAleksey]

Yeah this black and white works a lot better, but honestly I think your color helps this stand out way more. Is there a reason why you wanted to do black and white and no color?

[braden H]

@theprairiefox Awesome perspective! I'm thinking about trying to use the value study I do at the comp stage as guide for spot blacks like you said. I may try adding a simple midtone as many have suggested.

Thanks for the feedback

[braden H]

@Aleksey I just wanna show a black and white option for the sake of having a black and white option. Just to say 'hey, I work in colour but I can also work in black and white'. I'm planning on showing both, not just one or the other

[ShannonB]

@Braden-Hallett The changes are looking great, I personally think your colour looks great too and think if I was presenting in a portfolio I would put the two in because it shows you can do both well Great job