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    Group run through creative environment design week 3 art and feedback

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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey @Erin.Cortese last edited by

      @ErinCortese i did another layer with more lines so that its all lined up but if you look closely i only put β€œdetails” on parts that will draw your eye. Like the roof of the tal building, but the side of it has just 4 windows and no details.

      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
      alekseyillustration.com

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      • Erin.Cortese
        Erin.Cortese Moderator last edited by

        Here is exercise 6a. I did three of them, but I am not thrilled with any. Houses and building are not my thing. A lot more work needed here.

        exercise6a.jpg

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        • ArtofAleksey
          ArtofAleksey @Erin.Cortese last edited by

          @ErinCortese i love these! Especially the textures

          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
          alekseyillustration.com

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          • murielle
            murielle last edited by

            😲 😲 😲 These are all so good. I'm so bad at this exercise and I'm totally procrastinating :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

            http://artbymurielle.com
            https://www.instagram.com/artbymurielle/

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            • braden H
              braden H @Erin.Cortese last edited by

              @ErinCortese Building's aren't many people's things πŸ™‚ They're tough.

              @murielle I was pretty procrastinaty about last week's exercise! Don't feel bad. And you're never as bad as you think you are πŸ™‚ All our inner critics are jerks.

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              • burvantill
                burvantill Moderator @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                @ErinCortese I don't know what the assignment is, but I think these are great! πŸ˜ƒ

                Lisa Burvant
                www.lisaburvant.com
                Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                • Coley
                  Coley @braden H last edited by

                  @Braden-Hallett I listen to my inner jerk less and less as I get older πŸ™‚ We do all have one, though, don't we?! Gotta ignore that jerk ha ha

                  https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                  • Coley
                    Coley last edited by

                    Creative Environment designexercise6a1.jpg Creative Environment designexercise6a2.jpg
                    I did two sketches, drawing on a tablet which I don't have a lot of practice with! Just trying to get used to working in photoshop a little and not get totally overwhelmed like I normally do lol.
                    First house is based on hut from the film set for Random Passage, a wood hut with mossy/grassy roof. Second house is sort of greek themed.
                    Will have to get on the other two exercises asap. Bit strapped for time this week with kids off from school for easter break.
                    The exercises are teaching me a lot about using reference to influence my sketch and idea but not be married to it! I SO need to learn to do that. And last week's exercises on thumbnails was fantastic to get me started on that habit. Really learning some important ways to work here......pretty sure it will stay with me. Grateful for this group as well πŸ™‚

                    https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                    • Erin.Cortese
                      Erin.Cortese Moderator last edited by

                      The couches went easier, I feel much better about these. They are definitely less intimidating than buildings. What I do feel like I am missing here though is the stylization. @Braden-Hallett the stylization is something that you nailed! Yours look like they are ready to drop in a composition. Is that something that comes naturally for you, or did it come with practice? I wasn't even thinking about style or thirds and fifths while I was doing these, it wasn't until I was finished that I noticed the lack of style.

                      exercise-6b.jpg

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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                        @ErinCortese i want these couches in my living room.
                        I also like to prove my inner jerk wrong

                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                        alekseyillustration.com

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                        • Erin.Cortese
                          Erin.Cortese Moderator @Coley last edited by

                          @Coley These look great! You managed to capture a lot of mood and tone with these.

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @Coley last edited by

                            @Coley Do what you can when you can πŸ™‚

                            I'm learning a lot from this group run through as well πŸ˜ƒ

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                            • braden H
                              braden H @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                              @ErinCortese said in Group run through creative environment design week 3 art and feedback:

                              @Braden-Hallett the stylization is something that you nailed! Yours look like they are ready to drop in a composition. Is that something that comes naturally for you, or did it come with practice?

                              I think it mostly comes with practice. I've done a LOT of comic pages, so style's something that's crept in over time πŸ™‚

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                              • demotlj
                                demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                                The problem with procrastinating is that I look at what everyone else has done and am so blown away I'm reluctant to even try πŸ™‚ (I will give it shot but you guys are really good. I love everyone's stuff.)

                                Laurie DeMott
                                instagram.com/demotlj

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                                • MichaelaH
                                  MichaelaH last edited by MichaelaH

                                  Done...uff...only raw sketch
                                  CED_Workbook2-1487653085372-1a.jpg

                                  https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                  https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                  • MichaelaH
                                    MichaelaH @demotlj last edited by MichaelaH

                                    @demotlj I know what You mean, but we shouldn't be discouraged...try your best, we all are learning and learning never stops, we can get only better.

                                    https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
                                    https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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                                    • ArtofAleksey
                                      ArtofAleksey @MichaelaH last edited by

                                      @MichaelaH horsey! Nice touch

                                      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                      alekseyillustration.com

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                                      • Coley
                                        Coley @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                                        @ErinCortese fantastic couches!!

                                        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                        • Coley
                                          Coley @MichaelaH last edited by

                                          @MichaelaH sweet little barn and horses! I thought about doing a barn as well but haven't yet πŸ˜‰

                                          https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @MichaelaH last edited by

                                            @MichaelaH i was struggling on what to do with that little cube attached to the house. I never would have thought of a stable! Nice work πŸ™‚

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