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    • MichaelaH
      MichaelaH @Guest last edited by MichaelaH

      @hannahmccaffery I think the inside grey color should be more darker in values, as the bottom part of the red bottom part also bit. The left and right puffin ist almost like mirrored puffin, I would change it in some way or one away or it is to symetrical. Maybe I would change the position of the girl and the dog, that not everything is so middle centred or the big granddaddy more right to brake this middle..there is puffin in the middle of the wall sitting. And the background, I think I would like some white lines there? I love this pice, since you showed it on insagram...so I am happy to see it in color.

      https://www.instagram.com/michaelaheimlich/
      https://www.heimlich-illustration.de/

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      • ?
        A Former User @MichaelaH last edited by

        @MichaelaH Thanks so much for the feedback Michaela πŸ™‚ you're right about the values, i am going to start playing around with them as soon as all the last bits and bobs are finished.
        Ah yes, you're totally right about the mirrored puffins, I'll definitely change on of them so that they're different! I think i could space out the Grandad and girl a bit more so that they're not totally centered like you say.
        Thank you, it's taking forever though! Just can't seem to get into it!

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        • Kevin Longueil
          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Guest last edited by

          @hannahmccaffery This looks really nice! I think desaturating the railing a lot would be the only thing I would say for feedback - if it is not on it's own layer you could use the "sponge" tool to desaturate it to see what you think - great image πŸ™‚

          Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
          https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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          • Buddy Skelton
            Buddy Skelton last edited by

            The latest thing I've made.

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            Instagram: @StepOne_DrawCircle

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            • ShannonBiondi
              ShannonBiondi SVS OG last edited by

              My latest doodle. I feel like I can see an improvement in basic composition and perspective. πŸ™‚

              Screenshot_20190530-015032_Gallery.jpg

              @abhainn_fionn

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              • Heather Boyd
                Heather Boyd @Buddy Skelton last edited by

                @Buddy-Skelton

                That's a fabulous job and love the textured details. It's a smart and serious looking bird. Your concept creation or a bird unknown to me? lols

                Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
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                Be blessed,

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                • Heather Boyd
                  Heather Boyd @ShannonBiondi last edited by

                  @ShannonBiondi

                  It's has a nice punch (bold) -well done!

                  Instagram: www.instagram.com/heatherboyd.illustration/
                  Website: https://heatherboydillustration.ca
                  Shop: https://www.inprnt.com/search/products?q=HeatherBoydIllustration
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                  Be blessed,

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                  • ShannonBiondi
                    ShannonBiondi SVS OG @Heather Boyd last edited by

                    @Heather-Boyd Thanks Heather!

                    @abhainn_fionn

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                    • demotlj
                      demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                      I started this For the Creative Environment Design assignment in another thread and decided to try working it up. Lots of tweaks still to do on the line work and I’m hoping the next stage of values and shadows will clarify some of the busy-ness of the line but it’s been fun working on it.

                      9C60DEBF-A005-45BE-B018-FB734DF65425.jpeg

                      Laurie DeMott
                      instagram.com/demotlj

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                      • ?
                        A Former User @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                        @Kevin-Longueil Thanks so much for the feedback Kevin, I think you're right, it is a bit too saturated so I will have a look at that πŸ™‚

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                        • Buddy Skelton
                          Buddy Skelton @Heather Boyd last edited by

                          @Heather-Boyd

                          Thanks so much! It's my own concept based on prehistoric terror birds. Fascinating creatures.

                          Instagram: @StepOne_DrawCircle

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                          • Coley
                            Coley @burvantill last edited by

                            @burvantill ooh I love the color combos here and that bit of texture too πŸ˜‰

                            https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                            • burvantill
                              burvantill Moderator @Coley last edited by

                              @Coley thanx πŸ™‚. I’m doing the final in watercolor so it will most likely not look like this. 🀣

                              Lisa Burvant
                              www.lisaburvant.com
                              Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                              • Coley
                                Coley @burvantill last edited by

                                @burvantill watercolor sounds nice! πŸ™‚

                                https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                • kylebeaudette
                                  kylebeaudette last edited by

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                                  This is based off of a sketch by Ian McQue.

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                                  https://youtube.com/@kylebeaudette?si=ComtMDsVyK1HPn55

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                                  • Chip Valecek
                                    Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                                    I finished the album cover I was working on and the band is super happy with it.

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                                    While I had a day to unwind and relax I did this quick piece for fun...

                                    evil_nun_sm.jpg


                                    https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
                                    https://www.facebook.com/cvalecek
                                    http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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