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    • burvantill
      burvantill Moderator @TessaW last edited by

      @TessaW Thankyou very much. 😊

      Lisa Burvant
      www.lisaburvant.com
      Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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      • shanehunt
        shanehunt @Joe King last edited by

        @Joe-King I really like it, Joe! Great idea and solid execution. I think you just need to tighten up your perspective accuracy with things like the front curve of the ship and the engines. Nice job.

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        • shanehunt
          shanehunt @Jeremy Ross last edited by

          @Jeremy-Ross Hey Jeremy, sorry I haven't responded sooner. I wasn't getting notifications that I was getting tagged! I love your work ethic and all the designs you're pushing through. I'd love to see some of these without color, though. The colors and shading are a bit distracting from the designs. The other comment I'd make is that your line weights are all kinda uniform. Consider varying up your line weights to define the most important shapes and then stuff like the little polygon defining lines on this car could be much thinner and maybe even vanishing occasionally.

          Great work!

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          • shanehunt
            shanehunt @burvantill last edited by

            @burvantill Really solid work. Loving your use of contrast to emphasize your focal point. I do wish the car wasn't getting quite so lost in the composition. Nice job.

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            • burvantill
              burvantill Moderator @shanehunt last edited by

              @shanehunt Thank you! Even though this was my vehicle design final I wanted the vehicle to be more of a backdrop to the story. I still had a blast doing it though. Thank you for the good direction throughout. 🙂

              Lisa Burvant
              www.lisaburvant.com
              Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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              • Jeremy Ross
                Jeremy Ross @shanehunt last edited by

                Hi @shanehunt, thank you so much for the feedback and tips! Will definitely work on improving line weight.

                https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
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                https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                • jsnzart
                  jsnzart last edited by

                  I am really enjoying this course, and assignments.
                  Thanks @shanehunt

                  Made my own thread, but it feels kinda lonely😯

                  You guys and gals are doing great!

                  Assignment 1.
                  JKF-effectivevehiclesAss1.png

                  https://jsn.artstation.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/jsnzart/

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                  • shanehunt
                    shanehunt @jsnzart last edited by

                    @jsnzart Hey, these are looking great! Loving the dynamic proportion variations.

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                    • ambiirae
                      ambiirae last edited by

                      Wow Just looking through these you guys have done some amazing work! I love seeing all the variations of the vehicles and the different interpretations. Cant wait to take this course looks like a lot of fun.

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                      • jsnzart
                        jsnzart @shanehunt last edited by

                        @shanehunt Thank you.

                        https://jsn.artstation.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/jsnzart/

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                        • jsnzart
                          jsnzart last edited by

                          Assignment 2.
                          I should have put more thought into it from the beginning.
                          The Flintstones is too challenging!
                          Simple, but, too simple!
                          Just rock and wood.

                          Anyway, I understand form and function.
                          JKF-EffectiveVehicleDes_Ass2.png

                          1. Fred's new ride is a pickup truck, for the main purpose of shopping for Rex Ribs, etc.
                          2. A tank.
                          3. A wheelchair.
                          4. A square block of rock, on wheels.

                          https://jsn.artstation.com
                          https://www.instagram.com/jsnzart/

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