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    Little traveler - personal piece, need feedback :-)

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    • xin li
      xin li last edited by

      @LauraA thank you so much for the feedback. I think I will focus on proceed with no.2 and 3 at this moment, and work on the idea no.1 a bit more later

      @lmrush Thanks. I see what you mean now.

      @theprairiefox really good point with silhouettes. I will keep in mind when I am working on no.1 and no.3. I agree no.2 seems to have the most clear silhouettes.

      @Kim-Hunter I really love that you see the snail as her hourse. It was exactly what I had in mind. I wanted to draw one image where they curl up and sleeping togehter. But U like your idea of grooming, feeding and scratching. I will play with this idea.

      Web: www.lixin.no
      IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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      • Rachel Horne
        Rachel Horne last edited by

        I really like them all to be honest and I see you've already decided to go with two and three. Can't wait to see the finished results. I understand what you mean, I feel like I'm in a bit of a creative slump but it seems that despite the difficult times, you're still making lovely art.

        www.rachel-horne.com
        instagram.com/rachel_horne_art

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        • xin li
          xin li @Rachel Horne last edited by

          @Rachel-Horne thank you so much. I try to keep going with art as much as I can to maintain some kind of normal life. Of course, it is impossile to work fulltime on art right now, as I also spend lots of family time which is really nice (if it was not for this crazy surreal time).

          I love your recent instagram updates. They are bueatiful :-).
          Stay safe and keep going 🙂

          Web: www.lixin.no
          IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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          • Rachel Horne
            Rachel Horne @xin li last edited by

            @xin-li thank you 🙂 I've been loving your instagram pencil sketches. It's important to get some art in, even if it's just a small amount. It's definitely a strange time and even though it's great to spend some time with family, it's a little bittersweet too but art will see us through, I'm sure. xx 🙂

            www.rachel-horne.com
            instagram.com/rachel_horne_art

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            • MelissaJacie
              MelissaJacie @xin li last edited by

              @xin-li Look forward to seeing where you take this idea! Love the sweetness in it. Please do keep us updated on your progress! 🙂

              Melissa Jacie Art
              melissajacie@gmail.com
              melissajacie.com

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              • xin li
                xin li @MelissaJacie last edited by

                @MelissaJacie I can not decide which media to use.
                I made a quick ink wash test on my sketch book. I like the texture and the feel of the environment, but I never know what to do with the character when painting with inkwash. If I go with ink, I have to figure out how to paint the main characters somehow 🙂
                IMG_5907.jpg

                Web: www.lixin.no
                IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                • eriberart
                  eriberart last edited by

                  I love the energy that your ink washes have! You should check out Becky Cameron's work. She combines ink, watercolour, pencil texture and photoshop I think. I've always loved how she does her characters. She has more great stuff on her instagram

                  Instagram and Twitter: @eriberart
                  Website: www.erinmcclean.com

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                  • xin li
                    xin li @eriberart last edited by

                    @eriberart I love becky Cameron's work. thanks for the tip.

                    Web: www.lixin.no
                    IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                    • burvantill
                      burvantill Moderator @xin li last edited by

                      @xin-li i think that you could get away with really simplifying the shape of the characters. I just did a search and found Jon Klassen on Pinterest. I found a couple of ink wash illustrations that were simple but still conveyed the story.
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                      Lisa Burvant
                      www.lisaburvant.com
                      Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                      • xin li
                        xin li @burvantill last edited by

                        @burvantill yeah. Jon Klassen and Benji davis are good reference. I think I need to work a lot with getting good silhouttes. I love Becky Cameron's work. But I do not have a very graceful lines. My art look better without visible line work currently. I also like to work without much lines around the main characters at this moment. So I will be working more with shapes, silhouttes, and patterns. This came out this afternoon. I wonder if I can draw the little traveller in this style. ----
                        IMG_5923.JPG

                        Web: www.lixin.no
                        IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                        • burvantill
                          burvantill Moderator @xin li last edited by

                          @xin-li Nice. Loose but still has detail. 👍

                          Lisa Burvant
                          www.lisaburvant.com
                          Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                          • MelissaJacie
                            MelissaJacie @xin li last edited by

                            @xin-li Thanks so much for sharing this!! Nice work on the environment! On the character--maybe use inspiration from your digital work--create a character for the scene digitally and then use it as a sort of reference photo for your inkwash?

                            Melissa Jacie Art
                            melissajacie@gmail.com
                            melissajacie.com

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                            • xin li
                              xin li @MelissaJacie last edited by

                              @MelissaJacie thank you for the feedback. Yes. I plan to trace the character I did digitally into a piece of watercolor paper and paint traditionally.

                              Web: www.lixin.no
                              IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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