Little traveler - personal piece, need feedback :-)

lmrush

@xin-li Oh I meant from the first sketch, I now see you had zoomed in already in a later post

theprairiefox

@xin-li I love where you are going with these.

I think that the 3 thumbnails are much more powerful and energetic than the one in your original post. I think that is because you focusing on the characters doing something (other than just walking across the scene.)

Comments on each sketch

1: I think it might be more interesting if the snail was eating a strawberry too? Something to make it more active as a second read.

2: This one provides the best silhouettes by far. If you are going for a spot image I love this one for that.

This one is the hardest to read as a thumb because it is the most complicated, in a book I think it would work later after the reader is familiar with the characters but as a stand-alone, I think you might struggle to convey what is going on. I really like the overall design and using the grasses to focus the viewer back into the center.

Just some thoughts, keep it up. I know it is hard right now. I am struggling to make any meaningful progress as well.

Kim Hunter

It would deepen the bond and show us another side of the traveler if we saw her caring for her snail, perhaps the way one would care for a horse she loved. Grooming, feeding, scratching that itchy spot behind the tentacle. FYI - when you scratch that "itchy spot" on a a horse, it extends its neck, tilts its head and its upper lip will twist and elongate. That's horse heaven.

xin li

@LauraA thank you so much for the feedback. I think I will focus on proceed with no.2 and 3 at this moment, and work on the idea no.1 a bit more later

@lmrush Thanks. I see what you mean now.

@theprairiefox really good point with silhouettes. I will keep in mind when I am working on no.1 and no.3. I agree no.2 seems to have the most clear silhouettes.

@Kim-Hunter I really love that you see the snail as her hourse. It was exactly what I had in mind. I wanted to draw one image where they curl up and sleeping togehter. But U like your idea of grooming, feeding and scratching. I will play with this idea.

Rachel Horne

I really like them all to be honest and I see you've already decided to go with two and three. Can't wait to see the finished results. I understand what you mean, I feel like I'm in a bit of a creative slump but it seems that despite the difficult times, you're still making lovely art.

xin li

@Rachel-Horne thank you so much. I try to keep going with art as much as I can to maintain some kind of normal life. Of course, it is impossile to work fulltime on art right now, as I also spend lots of family time which is really nice (if it was not for this crazy surreal time).

I love your recent instagram updates. They are bueatiful :-).
Stay safe and keep going

Rachel Horne

@xin-li thank you I've been loving your instagram pencil sketches. It's important to get some art in, even if it's just a small amount. It's definitely a strange time and even though it's great to spend some time with family, it's a little bittersweet too but art will see us through, I'm sure. xx

MelissaJacie

@xin-li Look forward to seeing where you take this idea! Love the sweetness in it. Please do keep us updated on your progress!

xin li

@MelissaJacie I can not decide which media to use.
I made a quick ink wash test on my sketch book. I like the texture and the feel of the environment, but I never know what to do with the character when painting with inkwash. If I go with ink, I have to figure out how to paint the main characters somehow

eriberart

I love the energy that your ink washes have! You should check out Becky Cameron's work. She combines ink, watercolour, pencil texture and photoshop I think. I've always loved how she does her characters. She has more great stuff on her instagram

xin li

@eriberart I love becky Cameron's work. thanks for the tip.

burvantill

@xin-li i think that you could get away with really simplifying the shape of the characters. I just did a search and found Jon Klassen on Pinterest. I found a couple of ink wash illustrations that were simple but still conveyed the story.
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xin li

@burvantill yeah. Jon Klassen and Benji davis are good reference. I think I need to work a lot with getting good silhouttes. I love Becky Cameron's work. But I do not have a very graceful lines. My art look better without visible line work currently. I also like to work without much lines around the main characters at this moment. So I will be working more with shapes, silhouttes, and patterns. This came out this afternoon. I wonder if I can draw the little traveller in this style. ----

burvantill

@xin-li Nice. Loose but still has detail.

MelissaJacie

@xin-li Thanks so much for sharing this!! Nice work on the environment! On the character--maybe use inspiration from your digital work--create a character for the scene digitally and then use it as a sort of reference photo for your inkwash?

xin li

@MelissaJacie thank you for the feedback. Yes. I plan to trace the character I did digitally into a piece of watercolor paper and paint traditionally.