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    Little traveler - personal piece, need feedback :-)

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    • Kim Hunter
      Kim Hunter last edited by

      It would deepen the bond and show us another side of the traveler if we saw her caring for her snail, perhaps the way one would care for a horse she loved. Grooming, feeding, scratching that itchy spot behind the tentacle. FYI - when you scratch that "itchy spot" on a a horse, it extends its neck, tilts its head and its upper lip will twist and elongate. That's horse heaven.

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      • xin li
        xin li last edited by

        @LauraA thank you so much for the feedback. I think I will focus on proceed with no.2 and 3 at this moment, and work on the idea no.1 a bit more later

        @lmrush Thanks. I see what you mean now.

        @theprairiefox really good point with silhouettes. I will keep in mind when I am working on no.1 and no.3. I agree no.2 seems to have the most clear silhouettes.

        @Kim-Hunter I really love that you see the snail as her hourse. It was exactly what I had in mind. I wanted to draw one image where they curl up and sleeping togehter. But U like your idea of grooming, feeding and scratching. I will play with this idea.

        Web: www.lixin.no
        IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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        • Rachel Horne
          Rachel Horne last edited by

          I really like them all to be honest and I see you've already decided to go with two and three. Can't wait to see the finished results. I understand what you mean, I feel like I'm in a bit of a creative slump but it seems that despite the difficult times, you're still making lovely art.

          www.rachel-horne.com
          instagram.com/rachel_horne_art

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          • xin li
            xin li @Rachel Horne last edited by

            @Rachel-Horne thank you so much. I try to keep going with art as much as I can to maintain some kind of normal life. Of course, it is impossile to work fulltime on art right now, as I also spend lots of family time which is really nice (if it was not for this crazy surreal time).

            I love your recent instagram updates. They are bueatiful :-).
            Stay safe and keep going 🙂

            Web: www.lixin.no
            IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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            • Rachel Horne
              Rachel Horne @xin li last edited by

              @xin-li thank you 🙂 I've been loving your instagram pencil sketches. It's important to get some art in, even if it's just a small amount. It's definitely a strange time and even though it's great to spend some time with family, it's a little bittersweet too but art will see us through, I'm sure. xx 🙂

              www.rachel-horne.com
              instagram.com/rachel_horne_art

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              • MelissaJacie
                MelissaJacie @xin li last edited by

                @xin-li Look forward to seeing where you take this idea! Love the sweetness in it. Please do keep us updated on your progress! 🙂

                Melissa Jacie Art
                melissajacie@gmail.com
                melissajacie.com

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                • xin li
                  xin li @MelissaJacie last edited by

                  @MelissaJacie I can not decide which media to use.
                  I made a quick ink wash test on my sketch book. I like the texture and the feel of the environment, but I never know what to do with the character when painting with inkwash. If I go with ink, I have to figure out how to paint the main characters somehow 🙂
                  IMG_5907.jpg

                  Web: www.lixin.no
                  IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                  • eriberart
                    eriberart last edited by

                    I love the energy that your ink washes have! You should check out Becky Cameron's work. She combines ink, watercolour, pencil texture and photoshop I think. I've always loved how she does her characters. She has more great stuff on her instagram

                    Instagram and Twitter: @eriberart
                    Website: www.erinmcclean.com

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                    • xin li
                      xin li @eriberart last edited by

                      @eriberart I love becky Cameron's work. thanks for the tip.

                      Web: www.lixin.no
                      IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                      • burvantill
                        burvantill Moderator @xin li last edited by

                        @xin-li i think that you could get away with really simplifying the shape of the characters. I just did a search and found Jon Klassen on Pinterest. I found a couple of ink wash illustrations that were simple but still conveyed the story.
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                        Lisa Burvant
                        www.lisaburvant.com
                        Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                        • xin li
                          xin li @burvantill last edited by

                          @burvantill yeah. Jon Klassen and Benji davis are good reference. I think I need to work a lot with getting good silhouttes. I love Becky Cameron's work. But I do not have a very graceful lines. My art look better without visible line work currently. I also like to work without much lines around the main characters at this moment. So I will be working more with shapes, silhouttes, and patterns. This came out this afternoon. I wonder if I can draw the little traveller in this style. ----
                          IMG_5923.JPG

                          Web: www.lixin.no
                          IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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                          • burvantill
                            burvantill Moderator @xin li last edited by

                            @xin-li Nice. Loose but still has detail. 👍

                            Lisa Burvant
                            www.lisaburvant.com
                            Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                            • MelissaJacie
                              MelissaJacie @xin li last edited by

                              @xin-li Thanks so much for sharing this!! Nice work on the environment! On the character--maybe use inspiration from your digital work--create a character for the scene digitally and then use it as a sort of reference photo for your inkwash?

                              Melissa Jacie Art
                              melissajacie@gmail.com
                              melissajacie.com

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                              • xin li
                                xin li @MelissaJacie last edited by

                                @MelissaJacie thank you for the feedback. Yes. I plan to trace the character I did digitally into a piece of watercolor paper and paint traditionally.

                                Web: www.lixin.no
                                IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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