April WIP - feedback appreciated
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This is looking good. I agree with the tips stated above as well. And maybe one more. Lol. I would darken the value on the dog bot just a bit more.
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Incorporated all of your great feedback and made the following changes:
- Lightened pants and fence outline
- Darkened dogbot and house edge
- Added a little more of the fence post on the left and shifted the girl to the right
Is the big pointy fence post on the left distracting? Should I make the fence flat at the top?
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Itβs perfect
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Looks great! Is it just me or does the boy's face look slightly blurry in comparison on Dog Bot and Lisa?
Again this is really adorable. I love it.
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@TessaW Oh yeah it does in this! Wow you have like robot eyes!
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Yes! I think every one of these changes makes the piece better!