April WIP - feedback appreciated

burvantill

This is looking good. I agree with the tips stated above as well. And maybe one more. Lol. I would darken the value on the dog bot just a bit more.

Neha Rawat

Incorporated all of your great feedback and made the following changes:

Lightened pants and fence outline
Darkened dogbot and house edge
Added a little more of the fence post on the left and shifted the girl to the right

Is the big pointy fence post on the left distracting? Should I make the fence flat at the top?

Coley

It’s perfect

burvantill

Very nice!

TessaW

Looks great! Is it just me or does the boy's face look slightly blurry in comparison on Dog Bot and Lisa?

Again this is really adorable. I love it.

Neha Rawat

@TessaW Oh yeah it does in this! Wow you have like robot eyes!

LauraA

Yes! I think every one of these changes makes the piece better!