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      aprilshin last edited by

      Oh man, these are all so good! I'm drawn towards #1 aesthetically, and towards #3 for the idea. I feel the most emotion when I see #2... it's just so sad! And the cold color emphasizes it so much more. Can't wait to see the finished product since your work is always amazing!

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      • Coreyartus
        Coreyartus Moderator last edited by

        I'm personally a big fan of idea #2. There's something magical about it that your color choices and lighting seem to speak to.

        But seriously, these are all awesome ideas. Any one of them would make a really strong image!!

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        • LauraA
          LauraA SVS OG last edited by

          I love both 2 and 3!

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          • Neha Rawat
            Neha Rawat last edited by

            @Gary-Wilkinson Oh man! Right in the feels! All of them!

            2 and 3 resonated the most with me. I think 2 will look brilliant with the colors and lighting you have going on.

            Really looking forward to see how you take them forward!

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            • Coley
              Coley last edited by

              I liked 1 and 2 best, 2 is the easiest quickest read and a really cool idea and the lighting will be amazing. 3 I wonder if I’d understand it as quickly if I didnt read what you wrote first. But once the viewer gets it, it is powerful. They all are! Looking forward to progress, I love your artwork.

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                Kat SVS OG last edited by

                I like 1 the best because it could be really fun, but 2 would have cool lighting. Can’t go wrong with either one!

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                • JudeKillory
                  JudeKillory last edited by

                  great thumbnails, I like 2. It's the most legible, I thought 3 was an amazon delivery person then I read your notes and realized I was wrong. 1 is beautifully designed-great house, but I struggle reading the message you're trying to convey. I love the environment in the first thumbnail though.

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                  • Chip Valecek
                    Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                    @Gary-Wilkinson glad to see you back on the forums! I like number 1 the best. I also see lots of potential with number 3.


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                    • xin li
                      xin li last edited by

                      @Gary-Wilkinson is number 2 a kid sitting in a bird cage? Love it. I made a similar thumbnail a couple weeks ago in the begining of the lockdown. I found it surreal and strange to see that the only thing that was on the street by then was pigons ad crows. I was trying to make the windows on the building look like birdcages, but I could not get the image to work entirely. So it was just lying around in my ipad and do nothing. Your thumbnail shows me a very elegent solution by making one cage a focus. wow. I would love to see that idea come to the final :-).
                      Hope you do not mind I share my thumbnail here:
                      birdcage.jpg

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                      • Dima Eichhorn
                        Dima Eichhorn @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                        @Gary-Wilkinson N1 is my favourite

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                        • ajillustrates
                          ajillustrates last edited by

                          @Gary-Wilkinson My vote is for the first one. I'd love to see the wires criss crossing all over.

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                          • Johanna Kim
                            Johanna Kim SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                            @Gary-Wilkinson Hi Gary, as always, such great ideas. Sorry for the late vote. Love the imagined world in #1. It expresses the theme, but #1 still leaves room for humor.

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