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    • MyArt Multiverse
      MyArt Multiverse last edited by MyArt Multiverse

      I was wondering what you all thought of my concept for this months prompt, these are just rough sketches. I thought it would be cool if it was a team of fighters that control the elements and their gear looked dragonfly-ish...unfortunately when i told my fiance about it he said it sounded a lot like a toy/show from the 90's and that upset me because I didn't know about it so it's not like i was trying to rip it off.....I was so proud of this concept too 😢
      What does everyone think?
      I can't decide if i want to do faces or masks
      also can't decide if to make them full robots or not

      D-Fly_Elementals.jpg

      Stephanie
      https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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      • Lovsey
        Lovsey @MyArt Multiverse last edited by

        @MyArt-Multiverse I think that’s a very fun concept and take on the prompt! I love your gesture sketches 😊 I don’t know the show but surely you can develop the story to make it different and all your own?

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        • MyArt Multiverse
          MyArt Multiverse @Lovsey last edited by

          @Lovsey Thank you so much, I always try to find interesting poses, and I hope I can, I don't want to be accused of stealing anyones IP. It was basically a male version of the sky dancer toy from the 90's lol.

          Stephanie
          https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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          • Lovsey
            Lovsey @MyArt Multiverse last edited by

            @MyArt-Multiverse Oh I remember that toy but I didn’t connect it to your designs at all! With the huge variety of fairies and imaginative beings in the world there is plenty of space for more than one type of fantastical dragonfly creature, don’t you think? Go with your gut instinct 😄

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            • Neha Rawat
              Neha Rawat last edited by

              @MyArt-Multiverse Ooh! This is so cool! I'm not aware of the toys you're referring to, but it's still a very cool concept! Maybe the connection was made because there aren't many dragonfly superheroes? I don't think it'll count as a rip off unless you specifically design them based on the actual characters and their costume so don't worry about that!
              I love your gestures and costumes! I hope you can match it with an equally amazing story scene! Good luck!

              https://www.nrbstudio.in/
              https://www.instagram.com/nrbstudio.in

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              • Coley
                Coley last edited by

                I wonder if your fiancé meant a sort of general way it reminded him of a shows in that era, not a specific show ?

                These are very appealing ! 😊

                https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                • JoshuaDages
                  JoshuaDages last edited by

                  These are awesome! I hadn't even considered superhero/human characters for this challenge. So creative! I remember the Sky Dancer commercials and stuff, and that didn't come to mind when I saw it either. I actually thought it would be a cool comic book. And I agree with @Lovsey, there's plenty of room for fantasy creatures. Can't wait to see the final!

                  Joshua Dages
                  https://www.instagram.com/joshuadagesart/
                  https://joshuadages.com/
                  https://www.etsy.com/shop/JoshuaDagesArt

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                  • fpichel
                    fpichel @MyArt Multiverse last edited by

                    @MyArt-Multiverse Cool concept I think you should keep going, build them all out. Micro-feedback: I'd like the wings to be longer, to me these seem too short to provide enough lift + more dragon fly like if longer. ??? 🙂 rock on.

                    http://easternlit.com https://www.instagram.com/fpichel/

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                    • akpcreates
                      akpcreates last edited by

                      This is a cool idea. With the striped arms, tall boots, and helmet style, it actually reminded me of some character designs from the super stylish Sega video game series, Jet Set Radio (esp. the character Gum). I mean that in the coolest way ... the games are about punk kids who rollerblade around town and graffiti walls and avoid police. The whole game looks like a graffiti mural.

                      IG: https://www.instagram.com/akpcreates/

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                      • MyArt Multiverse
                        MyArt Multiverse @Neha Rawat last edited by

                        @Neha-Rawat thank you so much! I have a really tough time with environments so im not sure how I'm going to go about doing that.

                        Stephanie
                        https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                        • MyArt Multiverse
                          MyArt Multiverse @Coley last edited by

                          @Coley no it was a specific toy/show called Dragon Flyz lol

                          Stephanie
                          https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                          • MyArt Multiverse
                            MyArt Multiverse @JoshuaDages last edited by

                            @JoshuaDages thank you! I really appreciate that! A comic would be cool!...I've always had trouble drawing the same thing more than once though and I need a lot more practice with environments lol

                            Stephanie
                            https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                            • MyArt Multiverse
                              MyArt Multiverse @fpichel last edited by

                              @fpichel thank you for the feedback, the wings are giving me a lot of trouble so im def. Trying to work on them.

                              Stephanie
                              https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                              • MyArt Multiverse
                                MyArt Multiverse @akpcreates last edited by

                                @akpcreates omg thank you! I LOVE THAT GAME!!! Lol 😆

                                Stephanie
                                https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                                • MyArt Multiverse
                                  MyArt Multiverse last edited by MyArt Multiverse

                                  Here is an update of my Idea, I am having a lot of trouble getting the perspective on the wings right on the left side, I'm also not the best with lighting. Any thoughts and ideas are welcome, thank you!
                                  Fire_Fli.jpg

                                  Stephanie
                                  https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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                                  • Gabby Correia
                                    Gabby Correia @MyArt Multiverse last edited by

                                    @MyArt-Multiverse Love them!

                                    https://linktr.ee/gabby_correia

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                                    • ina
                                      ina last edited by

                                      These are really fun designs! I wouldn't worry about your fiancé's comments, after all, pretty much everything has already been drawn! But not in your voice. 🙂 Which is completely different from those toys.

                                      I'm sure you'll get good pointers from the others, but one thing that bothers me a little is where her left hand is supposed to be. It could be on the floor, perfectly aligned with the lower leg, but it could also be by her crotch or missing altogether. Great start though, I think they're going to look awesome!

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                                      • MyArt Multiverse
                                        MyArt Multiverse @ina last edited by

                                        @ina yea that was bothering me too lol, the reference I used has it not showing so prob. Perfectly aligned with the leg, although I'm more worried about wing placement and lighting.

                                        Stephanie
                                        https://www.instagram.com/my_art_multi_verse/?hl=en

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