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    Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?

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    • NessIllustration
      NessIllustration Pro @braden H last edited by

      @Braden-Hallett Yeah I think it might be because you have a lot of middle gray tones. The updated version you posted has the large block of high contrast, which really makes it pop!

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      • braden H
        braden H @NessIllustration last edited by

        @NessIllustration said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

        @Braden-Hallett Yeah I think it might be because you have a lot of middle gray tones. The updated version you posted has the large block of high contrast, which really makes it pop!

        Awesome! Good to hear it's popping more πŸ˜ƒ

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        • carlianne
          carlianne @braden H last edited by

          have you explored making the dark area more purple than red? The purple green combo tends to have a cool eerie sci-fi feel to it, might be fun! πŸ™‚

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          • braden H
            braden H @carlianne last edited by

            @carlianne said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

            have you explored making the dark area more purple than red? The purple green combo tends to have a cool eerie sci-fi feel to it, might be fun! πŸ™‚

            See, the interesting thing is that to me that DOES look purple πŸ˜† Purple green is exactly what I was goin' for πŸ™‚

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            • carlianne
              carlianne @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett moooooooaaaaar

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              • braden H
                braden H @carlianne last edited by

                @carlianne MOOOOOOAAAAAAR PUUUUUURPLLLLLLLLE!

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                • APHOTICMOTH
                  APHOTICMOTH Moderator @braden H last edited by

                  @Braden-Hallett Looks purple to me, a little on the red side. Like Mullberry/Wine. I like it.

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                  • aska
                    aska @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett looks really good now. I like that you made the bottom colour less greyish and more juicy. Purple works nice

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                    • Georgios Christopoulos
                      Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                      @Braden-Hallett Late to the party,but I think it works out fine.Maybe saturate th green a tad more.
                      Also love the letters! the handwritten format suits the cover so much!

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                      • braden H
                        braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                        @Georgios-Christopoulos said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

                        the handwritten format suits the cover so much!

                        Thanks! It turned out surprisingly well πŸ™‚

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                        • braden H
                          braden H last edited by

                          I think it's close to done πŸ™‚ Thanks for the feedback everyone!

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                          • burvantill
                            burvantill Moderator @braden H last edited by

                            @Braden-Hallett Nice. I like the saturation in the magenta. And the electric green details. Good color scheme. πŸ‘

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                            • APHOTICMOTH
                              APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

                              I liked the green text, but that's just me πŸ˜› Looking really nice.

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @burvantill last edited by

                                @burvantill Dunno why but I love purple/grey/green πŸ™‚

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                                • braden H
                                  braden H @APHOTICMOTH last edited by

                                  @CLCanadyArts said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

                                  I liked the green text, but that's just me πŸ˜› Looking really nice.

                                  It's still a possibility! It just reminds me too much of mint chocolate chip ice cream πŸ˜†

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                                  • lizardillo
                                    lizardillo @braden H last edited by lizardillo

                                    @Braden-Hallett I was just writing...

                                    β€œI really like the colours and dark foreground of this. From a graphic design perspective I also Iiked the title in green to help with the hierarchy of the text and help the title stand out when on a shelf (the accent colour green could tie the eyes/head circuit chip and title together if that makes sense).”

                                    ...but you have just done it before I pressed submit πŸ˜‚

                                    I like it in the green, I think it’s can be read and noticed easier. Whether the title is green or purple - I’m totally intrigued by what the story could be about by the cover as a whole.

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                                    • braden H
                                      braden H @lizardillo last edited by

                                      @lizardillo said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

                                      Whether the title is green or purple - I’m totally intrigued by what the story could be about by the cover as a whole.

                                      That's good to hear πŸ˜ƒ I always have a hard time pinpointing what part of the story will make an interesting cover or if it'll just be weird, lol.

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                                      • KevinTreaccar
                                        KevinTreaccar @braden H last edited by

                                        @Braden-Hallett I agree with everyone that this one is definitely popping a lot more. Much more likely to grab my attention when competing with other covers.

                                        From my foray into self-publishing novels, that was big in my eyes. How much attention can this cover grab on a website in a gallery of other covers. Muted colors can help feel like the story, but then might cause the book to disappear among other covers.

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                                        • braden H
                                          braden H @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                          @Kevintreaccar said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

                                          Muted colors can help feel like the story, but then might cause the book to disappear among other covers.

                                          absolutely I agree. Covers have gotta pop!

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H last edited by

                                            Aaaaaaaand done! Thanks everyone for the feedback πŸ˜ƒ

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