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    • kimchizerbe
      kimchizerbe last edited by

      @lmrush no doubt. But I love that we have this community here and the support to learn and grow together. Excited to see what sorts of assignments and feedback we will get in the class.

      Keep us posted on your whale illustration! I can't wait to see what you do with it.

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      • Kevin Longueil
        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @lmrush last edited by

        @lmrush Top right is my favorite composition - looks very nice to me 🙂

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        • MirkaH
          MirkaH last edited by

          I want to sign up for the course so bad, but don't have the extra funds. It looks like an amazing class though. Have fun.

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          • Sarah LuAnn
            Sarah LuAnn SVS OG last edited by

            That course looks so fun, but I can't justify it with a baby taking all my extra time. When I squeeze in time to draw I feel super accomplished.

            I'm putting in another vote for bottom center. Looks like a fun idea, I'm excited to see where you go with it!

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            • lmrush
              lmrush Pro SVS OG @Sarah LuAnn last edited by

              @Sarah-LuAnn It won't be long and you will gain more and more time to paint, you will see, it goes by so fast soak up all those snuggles, Luke rarely wants to cuddle anymore!

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              • Gary Wilkinson
                Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                I like the top right sketch, although I think it may look even better if there was some movement in the tail to balance out the composition due to the strong movement in the waves. Perhaps if the whale was curling into the boat from the left side (with its tail leaning to the right) it would help the eye flow towards the boat, does that make sense?

                If you don't mind me also comment on future values/lighting, I would say that if there is a warm light on the boat that contrasts with the cool darks of the water (with a touch of rim lighting on the whale) then it would look awesome, but that's getting a bit ahead of myself 😛

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                • drawingmelee
                  drawingmelee @lmrush last edited by

                  @lmrush It's hard to pick one thumbnail, they are all so much fun! 🙂 My favorite is the second one on the bottom row. I love the way you drew the boat on the water that way: very dynamic!

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                  • eleArts
                    eleArts last edited by

                    Whenever I'm creating thumbnails for a new project I strive to play with perspective as much as possible. For example, the last thumbnail seems to be an action scene, so I'd want to push the perspective forward to illustrate movement. By slightly overlapping the whale in the foreground with the boat in mid-foreground and the sky with waterline in the background will create a forward motion creating an exciting action scene for your final illustration. 🙂

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                    • DOTTYP
                      DOTTYP last edited by

                      I love the 5th one for the angle of the sea and boat but maybe with the angle the whale is in the last one (horizontal).Hope this makes sense!

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                      • lmrush
                        lmrush Pro SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                        @Gary-Wilkinson thank you so much all advice totally appreciated!!!!!

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                        • lmrush
                          lmrush Pro SVS OG @eleArts last edited by

                          @eleArts thank you so much awesome tips!

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                          • andyjewett
                            andyjewett last edited by

                            I like the dynamic of the vertical compositions... probably your fifth thumbnail.

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                            • lmrush
                              lmrush Pro SVS OG @DOTTYP last edited by

                              @DOTTYP yes thank you makes total sense

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                              • lmrush
                                lmrush Pro SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                                @evilrobot thank you for your input I really appreciate it

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                                • lmrush
                                  lmrush Pro SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                                  @Kevin-Longueil thank you kevin

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                                  • lmrush
                                    lmrush Pro SVS OG @drawingmelee last edited by

                                    @drawingmelee thank you

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                                    • lmrush
                                      lmrush Pro SVS OG @andyjewett last edited by

                                      @andyjewett thank you I appreciate your input

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                                      • lmrush
                                        lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                        Thanks everybody for your input on my thumbnails. I finally got a chance to sketch it out I would love your insight before I take it to paint. Thanks!

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                                        • lmrush
                                          lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                          My thought is to keep it to two colors gray blue and salmon, the boat will be salmon like the krill, the idea being the whale thinks his boat is a large krill

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                                          • holleywilliamson
                                            holleywilliamson SVS OG last edited by

                                            @lmrush what a fun composition. I just don't like that middle whale going straight up and down. A little angle would be nice I think. Also I what do you think about that middle whale being the one to hold up the boat. It feels a little weird that we can't see the rest of the whale that has the boat.

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