Help with picking a thumbnail
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I love the 5th one for the angle of the sea and boat but maybe with the angle the whale is in the last one (horizontal).Hope this makes sense!
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@Gary-Wilkinson thank you so much all advice totally appreciated!!!!!
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@eleArts thank you so much awesome tips!
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I like the dynamic of the vertical compositions... probably your fifth thumbnail.
Andy Jewett
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@DOTTYP yes thank you makes total sense
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@evilrobot thank you for your input I really appreciate it
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@Kevin-Longueil thank you kevin
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@drawingmelee thank you
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@andyjewett thank you I appreciate your input
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Thanks everybody for your input on my thumbnails. I finally got a chance to sketch it out I would love your insight before I take it to paint. Thanks!
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My thought is to keep it to two colors gray blue and salmon, the boat will be salmon like the krill, the idea being the whale thinks his boat is a large krill
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@lmrush what a fun composition. I just don't like that middle whale going straight up and down. A little angle would be nice I think. Also I what do you think about that middle whale being the one to hold up the boat. It feels a little weird that we can't see the rest of the whale that has the boat.
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@Rich-Green I don't see the Lee/David course. What is the title? I just redrew all my book pages and need to redo them again, I think....AAAgghhh!!! As my son says, they look a little flat and the eyes need more expression than just being circles......He has a pretty good eye and I always ask for his opinions on my work because I know he will be honest and he seems to get children's books. If I could wow him, I'd feel so accomplished
Marsha Ottum Owen
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I like the top right one. I think the wave is balanced just right with the position of the whale, etc.
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@holleywilliamson Thank you so much, I can totally see that now. I will play around a bit with it
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@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen It is Illustration 1 turbocharging your creativity
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@lmrush Oh, thank you for letting me know.
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@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen - Hi Marsha, Sorry I was not on here for a day or two and just seeing your question now. The course I had been referring was Illustration 1 - Turbocharge your Creativity. Here is link to the course page on the SVSLearn site: https://svslearn.com/classDetail/-KeUrrNoH9yvS19fsXA6
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Whale value study. Thank you for everyone's input, I took the tail away I think it reads better now, I would love other suggestions for improvement before I take it to color-Thanks everyone!
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I just realized I didn't tilt the whale
