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    • drawingmelee
      drawingmelee @lmrush last edited by

      @lmrush It's hard to pick one thumbnail, they are all so much fun! 🙂 My favorite is the second one on the bottom row. I love the way you drew the boat on the water that way: very dynamic!

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      • eleArts
        eleArts last edited by

        Whenever I'm creating thumbnails for a new project I strive to play with perspective as much as possible. For example, the last thumbnail seems to be an action scene, so I'd want to push the perspective forward to illustrate movement. By slightly overlapping the whale in the foreground with the boat in mid-foreground and the sky with waterline in the background will create a forward motion creating an exciting action scene for your final illustration. 🙂

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        • DOTTYP
          DOTTYP last edited by

          I love the 5th one for the angle of the sea and boat but maybe with the angle the whale is in the last one (horizontal).Hope this makes sense!

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          • lmrush
            lmrush Pro SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

            @Gary-Wilkinson thank you so much all advice totally appreciated!!!!!

            Lisa Rush
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            • lmrush
              lmrush Pro SVS OG @eleArts last edited by

              @eleArts thank you so much awesome tips!

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              • andyjewett
                andyjewett last edited by

                I like the dynamic of the vertical compositions... probably your fifth thumbnail.

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                • lmrush
                  lmrush Pro SVS OG @DOTTYP last edited by

                  @DOTTYP yes thank you makes total sense

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                  • lmrush
                    lmrush Pro SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                    @evilrobot thank you for your input I really appreciate it

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                    • lmrush
                      lmrush Pro SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                      @Kevin-Longueil thank you kevin

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                      • lmrush
                        lmrush Pro SVS OG @drawingmelee last edited by

                        @drawingmelee thank you

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                        • lmrush
                          lmrush Pro SVS OG @andyjewett last edited by

                          @andyjewett thank you I appreciate your input

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                          • lmrush
                            lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                            Thanks everybody for your input on my thumbnails. I finally got a chance to sketch it out I would love your insight before I take it to paint. Thanks!

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                            • lmrush
                              lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                              My thought is to keep it to two colors gray blue and salmon, the boat will be salmon like the krill, the idea being the whale thinks his boat is a large krill

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                              • holleywilliamson
                                holleywilliamson SVS OG last edited by

                                @lmrush what a fun composition. I just don't like that middle whale going straight up and down. A little angle would be nice I think. Also I what do you think about that middle whale being the one to hold up the boat. It feels a little weird that we can't see the rest of the whale that has the boat.

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                                • MOO
                                  MOO SVS OG @Rich Green last edited by

                                  @Rich-Green I don't see the Lee/David course. What is the title? I just redrew all my book pages and need to redo them again, I think....AAAgghhh!!! As my son says, they look a little flat and the eyes need more expression than just being circles......He has a pretty good eye and I always ask for his opinions on my work because I know he will be honest and he seems to get children's books. If I could wow him, I'd feel so accomplished 🙂

                                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                  • MOO
                                    MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                    I like the top right one. I think the wave is balanced just right with the position of the whale, etc.

                                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                    • lmrush
                                      lmrush Pro SVS OG @holleywilliamson last edited by

                                      @holleywilliamson Thank you so much, I can totally see that now. I will play around a bit with it 🙂

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                                      • lmrush
                                        lmrush Pro SVS OG @MOO last edited by

                                        @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen It is Illustration 1 turbocharging your creativity 🙂 It was fantastic!

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                                        • MOO
                                          MOO SVS OG @lmrush last edited by

                                          @lmrush Oh, thank you for letting me know.

                                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                          • Rich Green
                                            Rich Green SVS OG @MOO last edited by

                                            @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen - Hi Marsha, Sorry I was not on here for a day or two and just seeing your question now. The course I had been referring was Illustration 1 - Turbocharge your Creativity. Here is link to the course page on the SVSLearn site: https://svslearn.com/classDetail/-KeUrrNoH9yvS19fsXA6

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