Help with picking a thumbnail

[lmrush]

@eleArts thank you so much awesome tips!

[andyjewett]

I like the dynamic of the vertical compositions... probably your fifth thumbnail.

[lmrush]

@DOTTYP yes thank you makes total sense

[lmrush]

@evilrobot thank you for your input I really appreciate it

[lmrush]

@Kevin-Longueil thank you kevin

[lmrush]

@drawingmelee thank you

[lmrush]

@andyjewett thank you I appreciate your input

[lmrush]

Thanks everybody for your input on my thumbnails. I finally got a chance to sketch it out I would love your insight before I take it to paint. Thanks!

[lmrush]

My thought is to keep it to two colors gray blue and salmon, the boat will be salmon like the krill, the idea being the whale thinks his boat is a large krill

[holleywilliamson]

@lmrush what a fun composition. I just don't like that middle whale going straight up and down. A little angle would be nice I think. Also I what do you think about that middle whale being the one to hold up the boat. It feels a little weird that we can't see the rest of the whale that has the boat.

[MOO]

@Rich-Green I don't see the Lee/David course. What is the title? I just redrew all my book pages and need to redo them again, I think....AAAgghhh!!! As my son says, they look a little flat and the eyes need more expression than just being circles......He has a pretty good eye and I always ask for his opinions on my work because I know he will be honest and he seems to get children's books. If I could wow him, I'd feel so accomplished

[MOO]

I like the top right one. I think the wave is balanced just right with the position of the whale, etc.

[lmrush]

@holleywilliamson Thank you so much, I can totally see that now. I will play around a bit with it

[lmrush]

@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen It is Illustration 1 turbocharging your creativity It was fantastic!

[MOO]

@lmrush Oh, thank you for letting me know.

[Rich Green]

@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen - Hi Marsha, Sorry I was not on here for a day or two and just seeing your question now. The course I had been referring was Illustration 1 - Turbocharge your Creativity. Here is link to the course page on the SVSLearn site: https://svslearn.com/classDetail/-KeUrrNoH9yvS19fsXA6

[lmrush]

Whale value study. Thank you for everyone's input, I took the tail away I think it reads better now, I would love other suggestions for improvement before I take it to color-Thanks everyone!

[lmrush]

I just realized I didn't tilt the whale

[lmrush]

Quick color study I learned how in turbocharging your creativity. Another class starting soon. Sign up !

[lmrush]

Forgot to ask for your thoughts on color. Thanks!