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    I need some pieces to critique for "How to Draw Everything 2.0"

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    • Tyson Ranes
      Tyson Ranes @Eric Castleman last edited by

      @eric-castleman I can see the front of the pig in relation to the whole body is problematic but this overall look is awesome. I really love the lines and shapes! Really cool.

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      • Tyson Ranes
        Tyson Ranes @Jake Parker last edited by

        @jake-parker 0_1499438471883_IMG_1053.JPG

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        • ?
          A Former User last edited by

          I want to upload images but it keeps saying I don't have permission 😞

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          • Dennis Spaans
            Dennis Spaans @Jake Parker last edited by Dennis Spaans

            @jake-parker

            Also, I'm wanting to do a live version of this class in September. It would be 3-4 weeks long and have 4 assignments, you would get a recorded critique and draw-over of your 4 assignments, and there would also be 2 online live sessions where the class could ask questions and get live critiques. Something like that, still ironing out the details.

            Let me know if there's any interest in that.

            Thanks everyone!

            I would be very interested in taking this class. Although my timezone is GMT i would like to learn more and to have my stuff critiqued by you live after following a lot of svs courses ;). If it is not really in the middle of the night haha). What time do you usually have the live sessions?

            Dennis Spaans
            Website: dscomics.nl
            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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            • Chip Valecek
              Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Guest last edited by

              @ben-migliore make sure to resize your image. Keep it to 72dpi and no larger then 1000px width.


              https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
              https://www.facebook.com/cvalecek
              http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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              • ?
                A Former User last edited by

                Thanks @Chip-Valecek
                Here @Jake-Parker just use any of these

                0_1499439901904_Digital Art Final-01.png
                0_1499439885824_Poem.png
                1_1499439939348_Student Art Exibit Illustration(With Copy).png 0_1499439939347_Student Art Exibit Illustration.png
                0_1499439984071_Blue Jupiter.png
                1_1499440001612_The Blimps of Saturn.png 0_1499440001611_City of Mars.png
                2_1499440018861_12-52.png 1_1499440018861_9-52.png 0_1499440018860_3-52.png

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                • MOO
                  MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                  @jake-parker 0_1499444434251_19693433_10212397411703887_8691009804069697386_o.jpg

                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                  • lmrush
                    lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    Awesome so excited to see this Here is my Alice in Wonderland
                    0_1499451789535_alice.jpg

                    Lisa Rush
                    www.lisarushgallery.com
                    www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                    www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                    • Jon Anderson
                      Jon Anderson SVS OG last edited by

                      I used Inktober to get back into art and here are some I did before taking any SVS courses (boy am I thankful for them now!). If any of these fit the purpose then, by all means, fire away.
                      0_1499454898047_FB_IMG_1499454478602.jpg
                      0_1499454920531_FB_IMG_1499454487785.jpg
                      0_1499454938533_FB_IMG_1499454580108.jpg

                      instagram.com/jonandersonillu

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                      • gubhart
                        gubhart last edited by

                        0_1499485780900_2017-07-08 13.45.40.jpg 0_1499485799445_2017-07-08 13.42.33.jpg 0_1499485811189_2017-07-08 13.43.07.jpg 0_1499485829773_2017-07-08 13.43.49.jpg
                        These are a few ive been working on based on billy goats gruff. Would be happy for you to use them if they suit.

                        https://www.instagram.com/gubhart/

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                        • Jake Parker
                          Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by

                          Thanks for the submissions you guys!

                          @Eric-Castleman What a great drawing. I see a couple things I could work on there. But overall, it's looking good.

                          @Tyson-Ranes Thanks for the submission. This actually might not have enough wrong with it for me to use.

                          @Dennis-Spaans I was thinking of doing the live sessions in the afternoon, which would be sometime between 7-10pm GMT.

                          @Chip-Valecek I'm actually looking for drawings not illustrations for this class, and the illustrations you posted are solid anyway.

                          As for the drawings you posted, they just need little tweaks here and there. Nothing too structurally unsound in them.

                          @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen That would be great to critique, can you post a scan?

                          @lmrush could you scan this one?

                          @Jon-Anderson Thanks for posting these, I'll be using at least one.

                          @gubhart Thanks for these, I'll see if I can use them.

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                          • MOO
                            MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                            @jake-parker I will try to post a scan...I've aded some things to the picture but it is basically the same. Thanks.

                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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                            • lmrush
                              lmrush Pro SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                              @jake-parker Yes let me dig it up!

                              Lisa Rush
                              www.lisarushgallery.com
                              www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                              www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                              • lmrush
                                lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                Here it is scanned Jake, I hope this is ok!
                                0_1499563408752_alicesketch.jpg

                                Lisa Rush
                                www.lisarushgallery.com
                                www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                                www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                                • WithLinesOfInk
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                                  • Dennis Spaans
                                    Dennis Spaans @Jake Parker last edited by Dennis Spaans

                                    @jake-parker "I was thinking of doing the live sessions in the afternoon, which would be sometime between 7-10pm GMT."

                                    Cool! I will attend then ! Im very curious about this course and see how I developed since I took most of your and Will's SVS classes :).

                                    Dennis Spaans
                                    Website: dscomics.nl
                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                                    • Xovq
                                      Xovq last edited by Xovq

                                      0_1499751127087_run 02 small.jpg

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                                      • MOO
                                        MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                                        @jake-parker [0_1499727429568_SKonicaC36017071014220.pdf](Uploading 100%)

                                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                        • MOO
                                          MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                                          @jake-parker I got my pictuer scanned but it won't let me upload it here. Can I e-mail it? They did it in a PDF.....is that okay? maybe I can figure out how to change it to a jpg first. Thanks.

                                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                          • MOO
                                            MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by MOO

                                            @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I don't know how to send it to you. I did export it as a jpeg and hopefully I can find it again 🙂 I will try and upload it again as a jpeg.

                                            0_1499730122665_Uncle carl running.JPG

                                            Hope that works! It doesn't really have ground under the chickens or anything, just trying to get the runner to look good. Looking forward to a critique!
                                            If you need more, he's scanning my whole dummy tomorrow (32 pages 🙂 ).

                                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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