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    I need some pieces to critique for "How to Draw Everything 2.0"

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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

      @jake-parker 0_1499444434251_19693433_10212397411703887_8691009804069697386_o.jpg

      Marsha Ottum Owen

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      • lmrush
        lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

        Awesome so excited to see this Here is my Alice in Wonderland
        0_1499451789535_alice.jpg

        Lisa Rush
        www.lisarushgallery.com
        www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
        www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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        • Jon Anderson
          Jon Anderson SVS OG last edited by

          I used Inktober to get back into art and here are some I did before taking any SVS courses (boy am I thankful for them now!). If any of these fit the purpose then, by all means, fire away.
          0_1499454898047_FB_IMG_1499454478602.jpg
          0_1499454920531_FB_IMG_1499454487785.jpg
          0_1499454938533_FB_IMG_1499454580108.jpg

          instagram.com/jonandersonillu

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          • gubhart
            gubhart last edited by

            0_1499485780900_2017-07-08 13.45.40.jpg 0_1499485799445_2017-07-08 13.42.33.jpg 0_1499485811189_2017-07-08 13.43.07.jpg 0_1499485829773_2017-07-08 13.43.49.jpg
            These are a few ive been working on based on billy goats gruff. Would be happy for you to use them if they suit.

            https://www.instagram.com/gubhart/

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            • Jake Parker
              Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by

              Thanks for the submissions you guys!

              @Eric-Castleman What a great drawing. I see a couple things I could work on there. But overall, it's looking good.

              @Tyson-Ranes Thanks for the submission. This actually might not have enough wrong with it for me to use.

              @Dennis-Spaans I was thinking of doing the live sessions in the afternoon, which would be sometime between 7-10pm GMT.

              @Chip-Valecek I'm actually looking for drawings not illustrations for this class, and the illustrations you posted are solid anyway.

              As for the drawings you posted, they just need little tweaks here and there. Nothing too structurally unsound in them.

              @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen That would be great to critique, can you post a scan?

              @lmrush could you scan this one?

              @Jon-Anderson Thanks for posting these, I'll be using at least one.

              @gubhart Thanks for these, I'll see if I can use them.

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                @jake-parker I will try to post a scan...I've aded some things to the picture but it is basically the same. Thanks.

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                • lmrush
                  lmrush Pro SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                  @jake-parker Yes let me dig it up!

                  Lisa Rush
                  www.lisarushgallery.com
                  www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                  www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                  • lmrush
                    lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    Here it is scanned Jake, I hope this is ok!
                    0_1499563408752_alicesketch.jpg

                    Lisa Rush
                    www.lisarushgallery.com
                    www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                    www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                    • WithLinesOfInk
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                      • Dennis Spaans
                        Dennis Spaans @Jake Parker last edited by Dennis Spaans

                        @jake-parker "I was thinking of doing the live sessions in the afternoon, which would be sometime between 7-10pm GMT."

                        Cool! I will attend then ! Im very curious about this course and see how I developed since I took most of your and Will's SVS classes :).

                        Dennis Spaans
                        Website: dscomics.nl
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                        • Xovq
                          Xovq last edited by Xovq

                          0_1499751127087_run 02 small.jpg

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                          • MOO
                            MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                            @jake-parker [0_1499727429568_SKonicaC36017071014220.pdf](Uploading 100%)

                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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                            • MOO
                              MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                              @jake-parker I got my pictuer scanned but it won't let me upload it here. Can I e-mail it? They did it in a PDF.....is that okay? maybe I can figure out how to change it to a jpg first. Thanks.

                              Marsha Ottum Owen

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                              • MOO
                                MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by MOO

                                @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I don't know how to send it to you. I did export it as a jpeg and hopefully I can find it again 🙂 I will try and upload it again as a jpeg.

                                0_1499730122665_Uncle carl running.JPG

                                Hope that works! It doesn't really have ground under the chickens or anything, just trying to get the runner to look good. Looking forward to a critique!
                                If you need more, he's scanning my whole dummy tomorrow (32 pages 🙂 ).

                                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                • Jake Parker
                                  Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by

                                  @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen Thanks for this. I ran out of time to do critiques before I leave for vacation, but I'll be including critiques in the class when I get back and settled.

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                                  • MOO
                                    MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by MOO

                                    @jake-parker No problem. Thanks. Enjoy your vacation! I'll be leaving on one in a week 🙂

                                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                    • Chris Perry
                                      Chris Perry @Jake Parker last edited by

                                      @jake-parker 1_1499809513440_Props.jpg 0_1499809513440_Cinder-Elephant 2.jpg

                                      Here are some images you can use if you like Jake.

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                                      • holleywilliamson
                                        holleywilliamson SVS OG last edited by

                                        0_1499896337818_web drawing December_3.jpg

                                        https://www.instagram.com/holleywilliamsonart/
                                        http://holleywilliamson.com

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