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    I need some pieces to critique for "How to Draw Everything 2.0"

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    • Jake Parker
      Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by

      Thanks for the submissions you guys!

      @Eric-Castleman What a great drawing. I see a couple things I could work on there. But overall, it's looking good.

      @Tyson-Ranes Thanks for the submission. This actually might not have enough wrong with it for me to use.

      @Dennis-Spaans I was thinking of doing the live sessions in the afternoon, which would be sometime between 7-10pm GMT.

      @Chip-Valecek I'm actually looking for drawings not illustrations for this class, and the illustrations you posted are solid anyway.

      As for the drawings you posted, they just need little tweaks here and there. Nothing too structurally unsound in them.

      @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen That would be great to critique, can you post a scan?

      @lmrush could you scan this one?

      @Jon-Anderson Thanks for posting these, I'll be using at least one.

      @gubhart Thanks for these, I'll see if I can use them.

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      • MOO
        MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

        @jake-parker I will try to post a scan...I've aded some things to the picture but it is basically the same. Thanks.

        Marsha Ottum Owen

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        • lmrush
          lmrush Pro SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

          @jake-parker Yes let me dig it up!

          Lisa Rush
          www.lisarushgallery.com
          www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
          www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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          • lmrush
            lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

            Here it is scanned Jake, I hope this is ok!
            0_1499563408752_alicesketch.jpg

            Lisa Rush
            www.lisarushgallery.com
            www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
            www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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            • WithLinesOfInk
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              • Dennis Spaans
                Dennis Spaans @Jake Parker last edited by Dennis Spaans

                @jake-parker "I was thinking of doing the live sessions in the afternoon, which would be sometime between 7-10pm GMT."

                Cool! I will attend then ! Im very curious about this course and see how I developed since I took most of your and Will's SVS classes :).

                Dennis Spaans
                Website: dscomics.nl
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                • Xovq
                  Xovq last edited by Xovq

                  0_1499751127087_run 02 small.jpg

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                    @jake-parker [0_1499727429568_SKonicaC36017071014220.pdf](Uploading 100%)

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • MOO
                      MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                      @jake-parker I got my pictuer scanned but it won't let me upload it here. Can I e-mail it? They did it in a PDF.....is that okay? maybe I can figure out how to change it to a jpg first. Thanks.

                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      • MOO
                        MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by MOO

                        @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I don't know how to send it to you. I did export it as a jpeg and hopefully I can find it again 🙂 I will try and upload it again as a jpeg.

                        0_1499730122665_Uncle carl running.JPG

                        Hope that works! It doesn't really have ground under the chickens or anything, just trying to get the runner to look good. Looking forward to a critique!
                        If you need more, he's scanning my whole dummy tomorrow (32 pages 🙂 ).

                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                        • Jake Parker
                          Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by

                          @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen Thanks for this. I ran out of time to do critiques before I leave for vacation, but I'll be including critiques in the class when I get back and settled.

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                          • MOO
                            MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by MOO

                            @jake-parker No problem. Thanks. Enjoy your vacation! I'll be leaving on one in a week 🙂

                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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                            • Chris Perry
                              Chris Perry @Jake Parker last edited by

                              @jake-parker 1_1499809513440_Props.jpg 0_1499809513440_Cinder-Elephant 2.jpg

                              Here are some images you can use if you like Jake.

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                              • holleywilliamson
                                holleywilliamson SVS OG last edited by

                                0_1499896337818_web drawing December_3.jpg

                                https://www.instagram.com/holleywilliamsonart/
                                http://holleywilliamson.com

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