I need some pieces to critique for "How to Draw Everything 2.0"

[gubhart]

These are a few ive been working on based on billy goats gruff. Would be happy for you to use them if they suit.

[Jake Parker]

Thanks for the submissions you guys!

@Eric-Castleman What a great drawing. I see a couple things I could work on there. But overall, it's looking good.

@Tyson-Ranes Thanks for the submission. This actually might not have enough wrong with it for me to use.

@Dennis-Spaans I was thinking of doing the live sessions in the afternoon, which would be sometime between 7-10pm GMT.

@Chip-Valecek I'm actually looking for drawings not illustrations for this class, and the illustrations you posted are solid anyway.

As for the drawings you posted, they just need little tweaks here and there. Nothing too structurally unsound in them.

@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen That would be great to critique, can you post a scan?

@lmrush could you scan this one?

@Jon-Anderson Thanks for posting these, I'll be using at least one.

@gubhart Thanks for these, I'll see if I can use them.

[MOO]

@jake-parker I will try to post a scan...I've aded some things to the picture but it is basically the same. Thanks.

[lmrush]

@jake-parker Yes let me dig it up!

[lmrush]

Here it is scanned Jake, I hope this is ok!

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[Dennis Spaans]

@jake-parker "I was thinking of doing the live sessions in the afternoon, which would be sometime between 7-10pm GMT."

Cool! I will attend then ! Im very curious about this course and see how I developed since I took most of your and Will's SVS classes :).

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[MOO]

@jake-parker [0_1499727429568_SKonicaC36017071014220.pdf](Uploading 100%)

[MOO]

@jake-parker I got my pictuer scanned but it won't let me upload it here. Can I e-mail it? They did it in a PDF.....is that okay? maybe I can figure out how to change it to a jpg first. Thanks.

[MOO]

@marsha-kay-ottum-owen I don't know how to send it to you. I did export it as a jpeg and hopefully I can find it again I will try and upload it again as a jpeg.

Hope that works! It doesn't really have ground under the chickens or anything, just trying to get the runner to look good. Looking forward to a critique!
If you need more, he's scanning my whole dummy tomorrow (32 pages ).

[Jake Parker]

@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen Thanks for this. I ran out of time to do critiques before I leave for vacation, but I'll be including critiques in the class when I get back and settled.

[MOO]

@jake-parker No problem. Thanks. Enjoy your vacation! I'll be leaving on one in a week

[Chris Perry]

@jake-parker

Here are some images you can use if you like Jake.

[holleywilliamson]