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    I need some pieces to critique for "How to Draw Everything 2.0"

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    • Dennis Spaans
      Dennis Spaans @Jake Parker last edited by Dennis Spaans

      @jake-parker

      Also, I'm wanting to do a live version of this class in September. It would be 3-4 weeks long and have 4 assignments, you would get a recorded critique and draw-over of your 4 assignments, and there would also be 2 online live sessions where the class could ask questions and get live critiques. Something like that, still ironing out the details.

      Let me know if there's any interest in that.

      Thanks everyone!

      I would be very interested in taking this class. Although my timezone is GMT i would like to learn more and to have my stuff critiqued by you live after following a lot of svs courses ;). If it is not really in the middle of the night haha). What time do you usually have the live sessions?

      Dennis Spaans
      Website: dscomics.nl
      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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      • Chip Valecek
        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Guest last edited by

        @ben-migliore make sure to resize your image. Keep it to 72dpi and no larger then 1000px width.


        https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
        https://www.facebook.com/cvalecek
        http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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        • ?
          A Former User last edited by

          Thanks @Chip-Valecek
          Here @Jake-Parker just use any of these

          0_1499439901904_Digital Art Final-01.png
          0_1499439885824_Poem.png
          1_1499439939348_Student Art Exibit Illustration(With Copy).png 0_1499439939347_Student Art Exibit Illustration.png
          0_1499439984071_Blue Jupiter.png
          1_1499440001612_The Blimps of Saturn.png 0_1499440001611_City of Mars.png
          2_1499440018861_12-52.png 1_1499440018861_9-52.png 0_1499440018860_3-52.png

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          • MOO
            MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

            @jake-parker 0_1499444434251_19693433_10212397411703887_8691009804069697386_o.jpg

            Marsha Ottum Owen

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            • lmrush
              lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

              Awesome so excited to see this Here is my Alice in Wonderland
              0_1499451789535_alice.jpg

              Lisa Rush
              www.lisarushgallery.com
              www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
              www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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              • Jon Anderson
                Jon Anderson SVS OG last edited by

                I used Inktober to get back into art and here are some I did before taking any SVS courses (boy am I thankful for them now!). If any of these fit the purpose then, by all means, fire away.
                0_1499454898047_FB_IMG_1499454478602.jpg
                0_1499454920531_FB_IMG_1499454487785.jpg
                0_1499454938533_FB_IMG_1499454580108.jpg

                instagram.com/jonandersonillu

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                • gubhart
                  gubhart last edited by

                  0_1499485780900_2017-07-08 13.45.40.jpg 0_1499485799445_2017-07-08 13.42.33.jpg 0_1499485811189_2017-07-08 13.43.07.jpg 0_1499485829773_2017-07-08 13.43.49.jpg
                  These are a few ive been working on based on billy goats gruff. Would be happy for you to use them if they suit.

                  https://www.instagram.com/gubhart/

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                  • Jake Parker
                    Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by

                    Thanks for the submissions you guys!

                    @Eric-Castleman What a great drawing. I see a couple things I could work on there. But overall, it's looking good.

                    @Tyson-Ranes Thanks for the submission. This actually might not have enough wrong with it for me to use.

                    @Dennis-Spaans I was thinking of doing the live sessions in the afternoon, which would be sometime between 7-10pm GMT.

                    @Chip-Valecek I'm actually looking for drawings not illustrations for this class, and the illustrations you posted are solid anyway.

                    As for the drawings you posted, they just need little tweaks here and there. Nothing too structurally unsound in them.

                    @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen That would be great to critique, can you post a scan?

                    @lmrush could you scan this one?

                    @Jon-Anderson Thanks for posting these, I'll be using at least one.

                    @gubhart Thanks for these, I'll see if I can use them.

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                    • MOO
                      MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                      @jake-parker I will try to post a scan...I've aded some things to the picture but it is basically the same. Thanks.

                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      • lmrush
                        lmrush Pro SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                        @jake-parker Yes let me dig it up!

                        Lisa Rush
                        www.lisarushgallery.com
                        www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                        www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                        • lmrush
                          lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          Here it is scanned Jake, I hope this is ok!
                          0_1499563408752_alicesketch.jpg

                          Lisa Rush
                          www.lisarushgallery.com
                          www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                          www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                          • WithLinesOfInk
                            WithLinesOfInk last edited by

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                            • Dennis Spaans
                              Dennis Spaans @Jake Parker last edited by Dennis Spaans

                              @jake-parker "I was thinking of doing the live sessions in the afternoon, which would be sometime between 7-10pm GMT."

                              Cool! I will attend then ! Im very curious about this course and see how I developed since I took most of your and Will's SVS classes :).

                              Dennis Spaans
                              Website: dscomics.nl
                              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                              • Xovq
                                Xovq last edited by Xovq

                                0_1499751127087_run 02 small.jpg

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                                • MOO
                                  MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                                  @jake-parker [0_1499727429568_SKonicaC36017071014220.pdf](Uploading 100%)

                                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                  • MOO
                                    MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by

                                    @jake-parker I got my pictuer scanned but it won't let me upload it here. Can I e-mail it? They did it in a PDF.....is that okay? maybe I can figure out how to change it to a jpg first. Thanks.

                                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                    • MOO
                                      MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by MOO

                                      @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I don't know how to send it to you. I did export it as a jpeg and hopefully I can find it again 🙂 I will try and upload it again as a jpeg.

                                      0_1499730122665_Uncle carl running.JPG

                                      Hope that works! It doesn't really have ground under the chickens or anything, just trying to get the runner to look good. Looking forward to a critique!
                                      If you need more, he's scanning my whole dummy tomorrow (32 pages 🙂 ).

                                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                      • Jake Parker
                                        Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by

                                        @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen Thanks for this. I ran out of time to do critiques before I leave for vacation, but I'll be including critiques in the class when I get back and settled.

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                                        • MOO
                                          MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by MOO

                                          @jake-parker No problem. Thanks. Enjoy your vacation! I'll be leaving on one in a week 🙂

                                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                          • Chris Perry
                                            Chris Perry @Jake Parker last edited by

                                            @jake-parker 1_1499809513440_Props.jpg 0_1499809513440_Cinder-Elephant 2.jpg

                                            Here are some images you can use if you like Jake.

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