Love composition WIP feedback welcome
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@Aleksey The first thing that comes to mind that'll fit in that empty space bottom right is a big ol' punch bowl mostly out of frame.
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@Braden-Hallett that’s what i was thinking! Im struggling to figure out what to put in the back against the wall. Maybe a curtain?
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@Aleksey It could just be left as a dark space. Dances in gyms are usually pretty low light
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@Braden-Hallett yeah I put a single element in the back and it seems to works pretty well.
@Chip-Valecek hows this?
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@Aleksey this is looking good but I think that table is a little busy. I like @Braden-Hallett s idea about the big bowl. And for some reason the cane keeps grabbing my eye away. I hope you don’t mind but I played a little with the crop and foreground.
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@burvantill no I don’t mind. I put the cane there intentionally because i think it adds a little bit more story. And i see the bigger punch bowl makes sense but the right side feels emptier now for some reason.
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@Aleksey I agree. Maybe a different angle or perspective on the cane.
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@burvantill yeah that’s a good point. I flipped it and added a few more elements. I think using color and values with the spotlight will really help bring this together. What do you think?
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@Aleksey Yeah. I think I like how this one is turning out. Keep up the good work!
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Ok so here is a updated version done in pencil
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I think I might scrap this idea and do a different one that’s more fun