Simple composition changes for a much improved sketch

[aprilshin]

Wow, what a difference! And such a great image! My only two cents is that the bird looks very big. It looks like the size of a large bird of prey instead of a tiny bird that might rest on her finger. Love your character designs, though! Your shapes really convey the right emotions! ️

[Rachel Horne]

@NessIllustration this is maybe due to inexperience on my part but I think it's pretty much fine just the way it is. I like the fact that we can see the wolf in that sinister pose, maybe he could be just a tad further back but nothing much and I also agree that maybe the bird is a little large and the dress-hem comment but I really like the composition a lot, it's got a lovely flow to it.

[Julia]

@NessIllustration another composition that remind me yours and you may find interesting : the cover of the mitaines gang by a French illustrator
https://www.izneo.com/fr/bd/action-aventure/the-mitaines-gang-31462/the-mitaines-gang-1-a-bear-s-tale-74540

[NessIllustration]

@aprilshin Thank you for your insight! You are quite right about the bird, I think I will revise it.

@Rachel-Horne Thank you for giving me your thoughts on it, dear!

@Julia Wow quelle jolie couverture! J'aime beaucoup l'ombre du sapin qui se transforme en loup, comme c'est original!

[NessIllustration]

Pheeew it took me a while to find this post again haha! I finally finished this piece and wanted to show you how it turned out Thank you so so much everyone for your help!

[Kevin Longueil]

@NessIllustration Really nice!!

[baileyvidler]

@NessIllustration So good!

[NessIllustration]

Thanks guys!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@NessIllustration lovely!

[Jeremy Ross]

Wow @NessIllustration! Came out amazing! Let us know what your agent thinks.

[Mara Price]

@NessIllustration Lovely!

[NessIllustration]

@Jeremy-Ross She gave it the okay! ...after asking a couple more little tweaks haha This version you see if after she already had her stab at it

[Coley]

Not sure how I missed this whole thread but I love love LOVE your piece! Stunning!

[NessIllustration]

@Coley How that's normal the thread is from forever ago! I almost wasn't able to dig it up myself haha Thanks so much for the kind words!

[Neha Rawat]

@NessIllustration This turned out beautiful! I love the pops of red!

[aprilshin]

Love love love~! Thanks for sharing with us, Vanessa!

[Coreyartus]

This turned out quite lovely!!! Congrats!

[NessIllustration]

@Coreyartus Thanks guys! I'm quite happy with it myself, I think it adds some variety to my portfolio since I didn't have winter scenes in it before!

[carriecopadraws]

@NessIllustration Gorgeous piece! Love the atmosphere.

[NessIllustration]

@carriecopadraws Thank you dear!