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    • Griffin McPherson

      Feedback: Another spread
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      Erick Reilly

      @Griffin-McPherson I think you have the right amount of bricks. They don't take away the focus from the most important details of the spread, which is what you ant.

    • Griffin McPherson

      Feedback: Spread with room for text
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      von_Nimmermehr

      I really like the new version, and i dont think it's a problem, that the rock is kind of the same size as the boat man, in my oppinion. but you kan still play around with is as much as you like.

      The rock just below the boat catched my eye though becaus it just tips the boat, maybe you could make it a bit smaller or a bit bigger?

    • Griffin McPherson

      Ready to put in my portfolio?
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      NessIllustration

      @Griffin-McPherson I like the very faded lines!

    • Griffin McPherson

      Spread feedback
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      Tom Harshberger

      I love the idea, the warped perspective is a really cool idea. One thing I'd work on is sketching in a perspective grid so that each item on the wall follows that warping perspective as it goes down the hallway. Even though the perspective is intentionally wacky, the items still need to follow the overall warped lines for it to look right.

      Such a cool idea! Can't wait to see it.

    • APHOTICMOTH

      NIGHTFALL -Wip - Critique if you want.
      Projects • critique wip nightfall spread • • APHOTICMOTH

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      APHOTICMOTH

      @Neha-Rawat Good thoughts. I kept the glow as it's colored magic, but yeah, it probably would not be visable, or at least barely.

      The blur was on purpose as the small trees/hills are far away, maybe I should lessen it a bit, and blur the far away houses a tad to make more sense.

      Thank you!