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    • lizardillo
      lizardillo @chrisaakins last edited by

      @chrisaakins thank you πŸ™‚ I wasn't sure if B&Bs was one of those things we have in the UK and nowhere else would get the (not actually that funny) joke. I kept trying to draw details of honeycomb on a shape and failing miserably so went back to the drawing board and drew some blobs. I recommend it, it has helped. If in doubt - draw blobs πŸ˜‚

      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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      • Melissa_Bailey
        Melissa_Bailey @lizardillo last edited by

        @lizardillo Love your mood board & initial sketches! And I agree, the structure silhouettes are such a great idea.

        illustrator - author - smiley person
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        • Georgios Christopoulos
          Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

          @lizardillo I am afraid to give you my opinion..😳 😳
          Just kidding!!these silluettes are so so good!Cant wait to see what you come up with!

          Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
          Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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          • K.Flagg
            K.Flagg last edited by

            Great idea with the Bee & Bee thing lol. I can't wait to see where you go with this!

            K.Flagg

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            • lizardillo
              lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

              I have had a bit of time to work on this today. After a while of messily sketching all sorts of mess I have found out that the classic beehive kind of image is actually more like a wasp/hornet nest. I am still trying to go for that recognisable kind of beehive look so I am hoping no-one notices it's not 100% accurate 🧐 ! I'm still non the clearer of any design yet. Sticking with round shapes before I tackle any technical hexagons. Please excuse how rough these are.

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              Website: lizardillo.co.uk
              IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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              • Kim Hunter
                Kim Hunter last edited by

                We have B+Bs in the states too. I think spelling it Bee and Bee would be fun.

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                • ajillustrates
                  ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                  @lizardillo The one with the outdoor bar is amazing.

                  https://ajillustrates.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                  • lizardillo
                    lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                    A little more progress today. Still a long way to go. The ideas are there but need to work on making it clearer and play with the angle (like the rounded ones, ideally you should be looking up at it a little as its hanging from a branch). Theres a lot going on but these are really small sketches so everything is crammed in. Plus hexagons are difficult!

                    I do like the rounded versions but I think hexagons say 'bees' a bit more, and I think wasps nests are round. Honeycomb is very regular and uniform by it's nature but I am trying to break that rule a little. If I can get a bit of the life of the rounded shapes into this I'll be happy but it's whether I can do it is the question! 😰

                    I wanted a sign above the door saying "BEE-ENVENUE: (Bienvenue).
                    But I don't think I'm going to do it as it's mixing languages a bit.

                    Thank you for your feedback.

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                    Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                    IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                    • Jacy13
                      Jacy13 @lizardillo last edited by

                      @lizardillo Your ideas are great! So much detail you have in there. Can't wait to see your final image πŸ˜ƒ

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                      • lizardillo
                        lizardillo @Jacy13 last edited by lizardillo

                        @Jacy13 Thank you ☺ I love coming up with the little details, it's the best bit. It's all fun and games when you are drawing little scribbles. I'm guessing I will be wishing I had followed 'less is more' when I try to draw the real thing. πŸ˜†

                        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                        • Jacy13
                          Jacy13 @lizardillo last edited by

                          @lizardillo Haha, I feel your pain. Detail can be fun for the sketch, not so fun for the final render!

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                          • lizardillo
                            lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                            I have been in a whole world of hexagon hell with this. I think mapping it out on a perspective grid has sucked quite a lot of life out of it, I've overdone the hexagons a bit now. I think I need another pass with some more organic shapes mixed in, with a bit more variety of size and a bit more imagination further than hexagons.

                            I know bees are busy but this is all far too busy now! I also need to find a better way of attaching it to the tree.

                            I think I'm going to be down to the wire again!

                            Feedback and suggestions always appreciated. Thank you.

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                            Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                            IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                            • demotlj
                              demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                              This is super!

                              Laurie DeMott
                              instagram.com/demotlj

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                              • KevinTreaccar
                                KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                This looks great!

                                kevintreaccar.com
                                instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                                • ajillustrates
                                  ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                                  @lizardillo This should win Critique Arena based solely on the 'b' saloon doors.

                                  https://ajillustrates.com
                                  https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                                  • lizardillo
                                    lizardillo @ajillustrates last edited by

                                    @ajillustrates Thanks. I wondered if anyone would spot those πŸ˜„

                                    Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                    IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                    • KevinTreaccar
                                      KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                      I really hope this inn's slogan is "You can Buzz Inn, or you can buzz off."

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                                      • lizardillo
                                        lizardillo @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                        @Kevintreaccar Love it! πŸ˜‚

                                        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                        • lizardillo
                                          lizardillo @KevinTreaccar last edited by lizardillo

                                          @Kevintreaccar Liquor stores are called off-licences in UK so my take-out hatch might be called the 'Buzz Off' (licence) or the Buzz-out. Although neither of those really make sense πŸ˜†

                                          Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                          IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                          • KevinTreaccar
                                            KevinTreaccar @lizardillo last edited by

                                            @lizardillo As long as people get the point, it doesn’t have to make perfect, technical sense. I love the idea of The Buzz Out at the Buzz Inn.

                                            Buzz Inn, Buzz Out or buzz off

                                            kevintreaccar.com
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