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    • lizardillo
      lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

      I have had a bit of time to work on this today. After a while of messily sketching all sorts of mess I have found out that the classic beehive kind of image is actually more like a wasp/hornet nest. I am still trying to go for that recognisable kind of beehive look so I am hoping no-one notices it's not 100% accurate 🧐 ! I'm still non the clearer of any design yet. Sticking with round shapes before I tackle any technical hexagons. Please excuse how rough these are.

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      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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      • Kim Hunter
        Kim Hunter last edited by

        We have B+Bs in the states too. I think spelling it Bee and Bee would be fun.

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        • ajillustrates
          ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

          @lizardillo The one with the outdoor bar is amazing.

          https://ajillustrates.com
          https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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          • lizardillo
            lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

            A little more progress today. Still a long way to go. The ideas are there but need to work on making it clearer and play with the angle (like the rounded ones, ideally you should be looking up at it a little as its hanging from a branch). Theres a lot going on but these are really small sketches so everything is crammed in. Plus hexagons are difficult!

            I do like the rounded versions but I think hexagons say 'bees' a bit more, and I think wasps nests are round. Honeycomb is very regular and uniform by it's nature but I am trying to break that rule a little. If I can get a bit of the life of the rounded shapes into this I'll be happy but it's whether I can do it is the question! 😰

            I wanted a sign above the door saying "BEE-ENVENUE: (Bienvenue).
            But I don't think I'm going to do it as it's mixing languages a bit.

            Thank you for your feedback.

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            Website: lizardillo.co.uk
            IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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            • Jacy13
              Jacy13 @lizardillo last edited by

              @lizardillo Your ideas are great! So much detail you have in there. Can't wait to see your final image πŸ˜ƒ

              Deviantart: https://www.deviantart.com/jacy13
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jacy13draws/?hl=en
              Portfolio: https://jacy13.artstation.com/

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              • lizardillo
                lizardillo @Jacy13 last edited by lizardillo

                @Jacy13 Thank you ☺ I love coming up with the little details, it's the best bit. It's all fun and games when you are drawing little scribbles. I'm guessing I will be wishing I had followed 'less is more' when I try to draw the real thing. πŸ˜†

                Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                • Jacy13
                  Jacy13 @lizardillo last edited by

                  @lizardillo Haha, I feel your pain. Detail can be fun for the sketch, not so fun for the final render!

                  Deviantart: https://www.deviantart.com/jacy13
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jacy13draws/?hl=en
                  Portfolio: https://jacy13.artstation.com/

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                  • lizardillo
                    lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                    I have been in a whole world of hexagon hell with this. I think mapping it out on a perspective grid has sucked quite a lot of life out of it, I've overdone the hexagons a bit now. I think I need another pass with some more organic shapes mixed in, with a bit more variety of size and a bit more imagination further than hexagons.

                    I know bees are busy but this is all far too busy now! I also need to find a better way of attaching it to the tree.

                    I think I'm going to be down to the wire again!

                    Feedback and suggestions always appreciated. Thank you.

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                    Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                    IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                    • demotlj
                      demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                      This is super!

                      Laurie DeMott
                      instagram.com/demotlj

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                      • KevinTreaccar
                        KevinTreaccar last edited by

                        This looks great!

                        kevintreaccar.com
                        instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                        • ajillustrates
                          ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                          @lizardillo This should win Critique Arena based solely on the 'b' saloon doors.

                          https://ajillustrates.com
                          https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                          • lizardillo
                            lizardillo @ajillustrates last edited by

                            @ajillustrates Thanks. I wondered if anyone would spot those πŸ˜„

                            Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                            IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                            • KevinTreaccar
                              KevinTreaccar last edited by

                              I really hope this inn's slogan is "You can Buzz Inn, or you can buzz off."

                              kevintreaccar.com
                              instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                              • lizardillo
                                lizardillo @KevinTreaccar last edited by

                                @Kevintreaccar Love it! πŸ˜‚

                                Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                • lizardillo
                                  lizardillo @KevinTreaccar last edited by lizardillo

                                  @Kevintreaccar Liquor stores are called off-licences in UK so my take-out hatch might be called the 'Buzz Off' (licence) or the Buzz-out. Although neither of those really make sense πŸ˜†

                                  Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                  IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                  • KevinTreaccar
                                    KevinTreaccar @lizardillo last edited by

                                    @lizardillo As long as people get the point, it doesn’t have to make perfect, technical sense. I love the idea of The Buzz Out at the Buzz Inn.

                                    Buzz Inn, Buzz Out or buzz off

                                    kevintreaccar.com
                                    instagram.com/kevintreaccar

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                                    • lizardillo
                                      lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                                      Well after a good few rounds of revisions and changes and tantrums and starting again, I have eventually finished the line work. I may have to go over some parts with a lighter line as the new template is making it a bit fuzzy and it hard to see some details. hoping to get the colour done tonight and tomorrow when I can fit it in.

                                      I'm not sure about the beehive chimneys coming out of the sides of the top part. Should I remove them?

                                      Thanks

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                                      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                      • Jacy13
                                        Jacy13 @lizardillo last edited by

                                        @lizardillo Wowzers! You've gotten so much detail done. I love it πŸ™‚

                                        Deviantart: https://www.deviantart.com/jacy13
                                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/jacy13draws/?hl=en
                                        Portfolio: https://jacy13.artstation.com/

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                                        • APHOTICMOTH
                                          APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

                                          Amazing piece.

                                          All my links: https://APHOTICMOTH.carrd.co/

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                                          • Tiffany Thomas
                                            Tiffany Thomas last edited by

                                            WOW!!!!!!! Soooo amazing, love all the detail!!!!

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