coolest Treehouse WIP

[Pamela Fraley]

@von_Nimmermehr That comment was for you! haha. Love your design!

[von_Nimmermehr]

So, after qritique arena, and seeing other people just having kind of the same idea as me (no hard feelings, i guess it was kind of obvious) I wanted to give it another try.

I kind of liked the ship idea and i thougt it could be nice to have a tree thats looks like waves.

• Do you think i got the perspective right?
  I kind of struggeled here, because the form of the ship is kind of challenging for me.
• would you say, the dynamic/flow is okay here.

you can just draw over if you feel the need. I learn better visually.

since the critique arena is over, it's just about finishing a portfolio piece, because i alsway quit...but i want to have some finished portfolio pieces by the end of the year.

[AngelinaKizz]

@von_Nimmermehr looks really great so far!!!

[von_Nimmermehr]

@AngelinaKizz Thank you

[von_Nimmermehr]

here is my progress so far, im really enjoying my progress here.

[von_Nimmermehr]

can anyone help me out with the part of the ship i encircled?

I don't know why i struggle so much with this part ô_o
i tried it a few times now but it seems off to me

[KevinTreaccar]

@von_Nimmermehr I think the top line of your ship’s elevated platform is too sloped.

Basically, as I imagine a straight line coming out of the front of the ship as well as the flat wall you have boxed, I see the lines. Or quite pointing in the same direction. The second level line looks to me like it would be point a little to the left based upon the direction that second level cube’s side is facing.

Is that making any sense?

Everything else looks correct to me.

[von_Nimmermehr]

@KevinTreaccar

i dont think so, it fits perfectly into my grid i worked with.
Maybe i made something wrong thoug?

But i was more talking of the raling in the back...i cant figure it out thoug and also i dont know what to do with the front of the "box". just a window (I don't like the window Idea, since there already is a window)? Or a door? how big should a door be? Or how hight, i am sitting on that part for so long now its ridiculous

[von_Nimmermehr]

im getting closer to finish this peace....at least i didn't gibve up though.

Have you any recommendations how i can push the values more? i seems its just all the same values or maybe thats something i can fix later?

[Asyas_illos]

@von_Nimmermehr oh wow I love how the tree looks like waves!

[A Former User]

@von_Nimmermehr I love the concept and the drawing is very lovely.

Have you tried to lighten the value of the tree leaves/waves? That might make the boat pop more for the viewer.

Such a lovely piece, excited to see where you take it.

[von_Nimmermehr]

Thanks @Asyas_illos i really fell in love with this idea and im happy i got it to work though.

@Stephanie-H i made the colors of the leaves a bit brighter, also i changes the color to a liiiiittle bit more saturated.

i think i'm about to finish it. I will sleep over it and take a look at it tomottow again with some fresh eyes.

Do you think it's a portfolio piece? It would be my very first portfolio piece. for now i'm quite happy, i finished it or at least am about to

[Mara Price]

@Stephanie-H It's beautiful

[A Former User]

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[von_Nimmermehr]

@Stephanie-H love the Idea, havent thought of it but would look cute and cozy i guess. Thanks