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I need some pieces to critique for "How to Draw Everything 2.0"

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  • Dennis Spaans
    Dennis Spaans @Jake Parker last edited by Dennis Spaans 7 Jul 2017, 15:14 7 Jul 2017, 14:53

    @jake-parker

    Also, I'm wanting to do a live version of this class in September. It would be 3-4 weeks long and have 4 assignments, you would get a recorded critique and draw-over of your 4 assignments, and there would also be 2 online live sessions where the class could ask questions and get live critiques. Something like that, still ironing out the details.

    Let me know if there's any interest in that.

    Thanks everyone!

    I would be very interested in taking this class. Although my timezone is GMT i would like to learn more and to have my stuff critiqued by you live after following a lot of svs courses ;). If it is not really in the middle of the night haha). What time do you usually have the live sessions?

    Dennis Spaans
    Website: dscomics.nl
    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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    • Chip Valecek
      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Guest last edited by 7 Jul 2017, 14:55

      @ben-migliore make sure to resize your image. Keep it to 72dpi and no larger then 1000px width.


      https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
      https://www.facebook.com/cvalecek
      http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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      • ?
        A Former User last edited by 7 Jul 2017, 15:07

        Thanks @Chip-Valecek
        Here @Jake-Parker just use any of these

        0_1499439901904_Digital Art Final-01.png
        0_1499439885824_Poem.png
        1_1499439939348_Student Art Exibit Illustration(With Copy).png 0_1499439939347_Student Art Exibit Illustration.png
        0_1499439984071_Blue Jupiter.png
        1_1499440001612_The Blimps of Saturn.png 0_1499440001611_City of Mars.png
        2_1499440018861_12-52.png 1_1499440018861_9-52.png 0_1499440018860_3-52.png

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        • MOO
          MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by 7 Jul 2017, 16:20

          @jake-parker 0_1499444434251_19693433_10212397411703887_8691009804069697386_o.jpg

          Marsha Ottum Owen

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          • lmrush
            lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by 7 Jul 2017, 18:23

            Awesome so excited to see this Here is my Alice in Wonderland
            0_1499451789535_alice.jpg

            Lisa Rush
            www.lisarushgallery.com
            www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
            www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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            • Jon Anderson
              Jon Anderson SVS OG last edited by 7 Jul 2017, 19:15

              I used Inktober to get back into art and here are some I did before taking any SVS courses (boy am I thankful for them now!). If any of these fit the purpose then, by all means, fire away.
              0_1499454898047_FB_IMG_1499454478602.jpg
              0_1499454920531_FB_IMG_1499454487785.jpg
              0_1499454938533_FB_IMG_1499454580108.jpg

              instagram.com/jonandersonillu

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              • gubhart
                gubhart last edited by 8 Jul 2017, 03:52

                0_1499485780900_2017-07-08 13.45.40.jpg 0_1499485799445_2017-07-08 13.42.33.jpg 0_1499485811189_2017-07-08 13.43.07.jpg 0_1499485829773_2017-07-08 13.43.49.jpg
                These are a few ive been working on based on billy goats gruff. Would be happy for you to use them if they suit.

                https://www.instagram.com/gubhart/

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                • Jake Parker
                  Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by 8 Jul 2017, 19:43

                  Thanks for the submissions you guys!

                  @Eric-Castleman What a great drawing. I see a couple things I could work on there. But overall, it's looking good.

                  @Tyson-Ranes Thanks for the submission. This actually might not have enough wrong with it for me to use.

                  @Dennis-Spaans I was thinking of doing the live sessions in the afternoon, which would be sometime between 7-10pm GMT.

                  @Chip-Valecek I'm actually looking for drawings not illustrations for this class, and the illustrations you posted are solid anyway.

                  As for the drawings you posted, they just need little tweaks here and there. Nothing too structurally unsound in them.

                  @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen That would be great to critique, can you post a scan?

                  @lmrush could you scan this one?

                  @Jon-Anderson Thanks for posting these, I'll be using at least one.

                  @gubhart Thanks for these, I'll see if I can use them.

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by 8 Jul 2017, 20:57

                    @jake-parker I will try to post a scan...I've aded some things to the picture but it is basically the same. Thanks.

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • lmrush
                      lmrush Pro SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by 9 Jul 2017, 01:15

                      @jake-parker Yes let me dig it up!

                      Lisa Rush
                      www.lisarushgallery.com
                      www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                      www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                      • lmrush
                        lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by 9 Jul 2017, 01:24

                        Here it is scanned Jake, I hope this is ok!
                        0_1499563408752_alicesketch.jpg

                        Lisa Rush
                        www.lisarushgallery.com
                        www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                        www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                        • WithLinesOfInk
                          WithLinesOfInk last edited by 9 Jul 2017, 02:21

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                          • Dennis Spaans
                            Dennis Spaans @Jake Parker last edited by Dennis Spaans 9 Jul 2017, 11:54 9 Jul 2017, 11:50

                            @jake-parker "I was thinking of doing the live sessions in the afternoon, which would be sometime between 7-10pm GMT."

                            Cool! I will attend then ! Im very curious about this course and see how I developed since I took most of your and Will's SVS classes :).

                            Dennis Spaans
                            Website: dscomics.nl
                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                            • Xovq
                              Xovq last edited by Xovq 11 Jul 2017, 05:32 9 Jul 2017, 17:48

                              0_1499751127087_run 02 small.jpg

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                              • MOO
                                MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by 10 Jul 2017, 22:57

                                @jake-parker [0_1499727429568_SKonicaC36017071014220.pdf](Uploading 100%)

                                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                • MOO
                                  MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by 10 Jul 2017, 22:58

                                  @jake-parker I got my pictuer scanned but it won't let me upload it here. Can I e-mail it? They did it in a PDF.....is that okay? maybe I can figure out how to change it to a jpg first. Thanks.

                                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                  • MOO
                                    MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by MOO 12 Jul 2017, 00:35 10 Jul 2017, 23:42

                                    @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I don't know how to send it to you. I did export it as a jpeg and hopefully I can find it again 🙂 I will try and upload it again as a jpeg.

                                    0_1499730122665_Uncle carl running.JPG

                                    Hope that works! It doesn't really have ground under the chickens or anything, just trying to get the runner to look good. Looking forward to a critique!
                                    If you need more, he's scanning my whole dummy tomorrow (32 pages 🙂 ).

                                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                    • Jake Parker
                                      Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by 11 Jul 2017, 18:12

                                      @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen Thanks for this. I ran out of time to do critiques before I leave for vacation, but I'll be including critiques in the class when I get back and settled.

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                                      • MOO
                                        MOO SVS OG @Jake Parker last edited by MOO 11 Jul 2017, 18:57 11 Jul 2017, 18:56

                                        @jake-parker No problem. Thanks. Enjoy your vacation! I'll be leaving on one in a week 🙂

                                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                        • Chris Perry
                                          Chris Perry @Jake Parker last edited by 11 Jul 2017, 21:45

                                          @jake-parker 1_1499809513440_Props.jpg 0_1499809513440_Cinder-Elephant 2.jpg

                                          Here are some images you can use if you like Jake.

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