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    • DOTTYP
      DOTTYP last edited by

      Another vote for number 1. so cute!!

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      • Jose Ramos
        Jose Ramos last edited by

        Number 1, but how Kevin has told, with the baby looking up. 😉

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        • Kevin Longueil
          Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

          Was thinking maybe if the handle of the pan was pointed at the mom a bit more and not in line with the cereal box it might lead the eye better - this might also give room to show where the baby's other foot is - a bit early for this kind of feedback maybe....Looking forward to seeing you work on this 🙂

          Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
          https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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          • evilrobot
            evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

            Thanks for all the comments and for the advise 🙂 Here's the line drawing I came up with. 0_1500441572588_finished-line.jpg

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            • Kevin Longueil
              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

              @evilrobot This looks great to me! Really nicely done.

              Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
              https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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              • TessaW
                TessaW last edited by

                Wow, you have really strong design and drawing skills. This looks amazing.

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                Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                • RobinSlee
                  RobinSlee last edited by

                  Came out great. Do you plan on coloring it?

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                  • bnewman
                    bnewman @evilrobot last edited by

                    @evilrobot Superb. Color?

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                    • NoWayMe
                      NoWayMe last edited by

                      Super!!! I love it! 🙂

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                      • Jose Ramos
                        Jose Ramos last edited by

                        I like it. 😉

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