Hello! also, please give critique

[lady chamomile]

This is so awesome! I love it! My only critique would be, remove the highlight on the hook and instead put it on the teeth- you know, for a "colgate smile" moment- to really sell the idea of anyone can have a great smile sort of thing XD

[Yego]

Hi Guys!
Sorry for not responding for such long time. Deadline has come, so I guess that's it. Thank You all for yor help. Below I present to you finished product.

@lady-chamomile thanks for your critique.
@Zombie-Rhythm thank for your input, and yes. I use some backlight in 99% of my illustration

[Sas]

@yego Wow these look great! You must be so proud

[aska]

@yego looks great!

[Yego]

@Sas I am! Thank U!
@aska Thanks!