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    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @avfarrar last edited by

      I love your shading and linework. Great job!

      Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
      YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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      • avfarrar
        avfarrar @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

        @nyrrylcadiz Thank you! I am trying something new, where I do the shading first and then add color. We'll see how it turns out. 🙂

        There is beauty in life!

        WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
        www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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        • Justin Moss
          Justin Moss last edited by

          I really like the direction you are heading.

          I would suggest pushing your darker values. This could really help the focal point. The line width is great. It does a wonderful job of leading the eye around the piece. Along with the shape language you are using.

          Keep up the good work!

          Justin Moss
          JMossCreations
          https://cara.app/jmosscreations
          www.instagram.com/jmosscreations

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          • avfarrar
            avfarrar @Justin Moss last edited by

            @Justin-Moss Thanks for the feedback! Yes I agree that it needs to be darker. Trying to figure out how to do that without losing the dragon's expression--changing into something else... 🤔

            There is beauty in life!

            WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
            www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @avfarrar last edited by

              @avfarrar you’re work is already looking great. I can’t wait for the final version.

              Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
              YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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              • avfarrar
                avfarrar last edited by

                Here is my final piece! Just submitted it in the contest. Yaay!

                Small_Girl_Knight_Against_Dragon_SVS_color_v2_1252019.jpg

                There is beauty in life!

                WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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                • theprairiefox
                  theprairiefox last edited by

                  @avfarrar I love the expression on the dragon.

                  -The Prairie Fox
                  https://www.instagram.com/theprairiefox
                  https://www.theprairiefox.com

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                  • djly
                    djly @avfarrar last edited by

                    @avfarrar did you like coloring using the "shading first" method?

                    Thanks for posting your work. I love the final piece. I'm new to the world of illustration and so inspiring to see work like yours.

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                    • avfarrar
                      avfarrar @djly last edited by

                      @djly Thanks! I appreciate that. God bless your journey in art!
                      To answer you're question, I think that I did like the shading first method. This picture was done in Photoshop, so doing the "shading-first" method made it easier to do quick changes on the shading even while working on the color, because they were on separate layers.

                      There is beauty in life!

                      WWW.AVFILLUSTRATION.COM
                      www.instagram.com/avfillustration/

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                      • djly
                        djly @avfarrar last edited by

                        @avfarrar thank you for the kind words. And good to know about the "shading first" method - thank you for answering my question. Much appreciated!

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