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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey last edited by

      Ok here’s a rough sketch of where things are gonna go. Haven’t done the part figuring out which objects go where yet though just placeholders
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      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
      alekseyillustration.com

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      • evilrobot
        evilrobot SVS OG @ArtofAleksey last edited by

        @Aleksey NICE!

        http://www.palacioillustration.com/

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        • xin li
          xin li last edited by

          Wow. This is a very challenging composition. Really well done. Would love to see how it develops further.

          Web: www.lixin.no
          IG: www.instagram.com/lixin.illustration/

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey @xin li last edited by

            @xin-li i do too

            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
            alekseyillustration.com

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            • ArtofAleksey
              ArtofAleksey last edited by

              More updated sketch. Blarg would have done more but so tired from work. I hate working retail.

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              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
              alekseyillustration.com

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              • Kris
                Kris @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                @Aleksey This is looking really good. I know them retail blues :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:
                If I might; for the meter on the last two lines, would you consider:
                "Even quicker than it starts,
                May strongest bonds be pulled apart”
                just a suggestion 🤷♀
                I love the witch character. It's like she's pulled out of out fairy tales...or mayby from some Terry Pratchett novel 😂

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey @Kris last edited by

                  @Kris being compared to terry pratchet books?? ❤
                  And ty for the suggestion that does sound good but i wanna emphasize rhyme just because it’s fun

                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • Erin.Cortese
                    Erin.Cortese Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                    @Aleksey This is looking fanatastic, really great work!

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                    • Joslyn Schmitt
                      Joslyn Schmitt last edited by

                      This is looking amazing! Love the composition and the poem. Plus that little cat.

                      Keep up the great work!

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                      • burvantill
                        burvantill Moderator last edited by

                        This is looking good. I love the 50things projects so I’m routing for you to make it happen. Good luck on the contest. This is already one of my favorites. 👍

                        Lisa Burvant
                        www.lisaburvant.com
                        Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                        • ArtofAleksey
                          ArtofAleksey @burvantill last edited by ArtofAleksey

                          @burvantill awww you guys are soo greatt you made me feel better! (Im at work on a Saturday when the trains arent running so I appreciate you all for the messages and upvotes)

                          The real struggle is gonna be fitting stuff on those back shelves. I might instead do stuff hanging on the wall instead of shelved objects.

                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                          alekseyillustration.com

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                          • ArtofAleksey
                            ArtofAleksey last edited by

                            Ok here’s a rough sketch of it before I do inks
                            Gonna get rid of that extra lantern and put something Else there
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                            instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                            alekseyillustration.com

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                            • mag
                              mag Pro SVS OG @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                              @Aleksey awesome! I love it!

                              Mag
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                              http://mag.takac.name

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                              • Erin.Cortese
                                Erin.Cortese Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                @Aleksey Wow, this is awesome!

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                                • ArtofAleksey
                                  ArtofAleksey @Erin.Cortese last edited by

                                  @inkandspatter @mag thanks! It’s coming along pretty well. Coloring it is gonna be a nightmare but I’m excited

                                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                  alekseyillustration.com

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                                  • ArtofAleksey
                                    ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

                                    Whew. Alrighty here is the inked version pre value and color. Gonna take a break for a little bit and work on my building backgrounds homework. I counted and successfully did 50 different things!
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                                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                    alekseyillustration.com

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                                    • ArtofAleksey
                                      ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                      Here’s what the values will be, sorta maybe.
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                                      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                      alekseyillustration.com

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                                      • ?
                                        A Former User last edited by

                                        This looks amazing! I absolutely love all the little bits and bobs you've managed to squeeze into the composition, it works really well!
                                        Sorry i'm so late in suggesting this, the smoke coming out of the cauldron looks wispy but the heart itself is a cloud of smoke, maybe the heart should also be wispy as you wouldn't have two types of smoke? Only a suggestion anyway!
                                        I love the witch's face and the little cat, look forward to seeing this in colour!

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                                        • ArtofAleksey
                                          ArtofAleksey @Guest last edited by

                                          @hannahmccaffery hmm i kinda want that effect but i think i can make it look better now that you mention it, ty

                                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                          alekseyillustration.com

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                                          • evilrobot
                                            evilrobot SVS OG last edited by evilrobot

                                            Line work and composition look great. Love all the details you've stuck in.

                                            http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                                            https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

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