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    September prompt WIP. Feedback always welcome :)

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    • Chip Valecek
      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @braden H last edited by

      @Braden-Hallett middle fits the prompt the best.


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      • SFischer
        SFischer last edited by

        Middle prompt will be a hit!

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        • braden H
          braden H last edited by

          Thanks everyone 🍑 (I meant to do a smiley face but I'm keeping whatever the hell that thing is) πŸ˜ƒ

          I'm surprised it's the middle one! But that's probably because I identify with #3 more as an ex substitute teacher :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

          Middle one it is! I may do a spread to extend the train of weird stuff πŸ™‚

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          • braden H
            braden H last edited by

            I decided this was a good candidate for a spread (and also, I don't have any spreads in my portfolio...) πŸ™‚

            Rough sketch, basic value study, and a couple of colour studies.

            I'm going with the one with the orange bus (it's closer to a real school bus colour and isn't so vibratey colour-wise.

            My plan with the colour choices (I wanted LOTS of colours.) is to start with red on the left, and then gradually go around the colour wheel with green on the right. Then we pop up to yellow for the bird cage and street sign and finally orange for the bus. And then in flows round and round (I hope πŸ™‚ )

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            • braden H
              braden H last edited by

              And my goal for artistic development at the moment is work lighter and brighter in general. I have the bad habit of going dark and grey given half a chance πŸ™‚

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              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett this already looks great! I really like where you’re going with the color!

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                • Coley
                  Coley @braden H last edited by

                  @Braden-Hallett wow it's already totally awesome

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                  • holleywilliamson
                    holleywilliamson SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett I love the contrast and dark!

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                    • braden H
                      braden H last edited by

                      Sketch! So many kids! I fit in my webcomic characters and a few of the kids from my grade 5 practicum class πŸ™‚ Tryin' to push sizes and shapes!

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                      • Chip Valecek
                        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                        @Braden-Hallett looking great! So many lil people to paint. Love that shark in the tank LOL


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                        • theprairiefox
                          theprairiefox last edited by

                          @Braden-Hallett it is looking good. I love all the faces and expressions. Makes the piece stand out!

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                          • braden H
                            braden H last edited by

                            @Chip-Valecek @theprairiefox @holleywilliamson @Coley @Nyrryl-Cadiz

                            Thanks for the feedback everyone πŸ™‚

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                            • braden H
                              braden H last edited by

                              Phew! Ready for inks! I think I'm happy with the variety of kids and poses.

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                              • Erin.Cortese
                                Erin.Cortese Moderator @braden H last edited by

                                @Braden-Hallett In loooove with this composition! It is so much fun!

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                                • Coley
                                  Coley @braden H last edited by

                                  @Braden-Hallett yes this is totally awesome!

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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H last edited by

                                    @Erin-Cortese @Coley Thanks! πŸ˜ƒ I never know whether it's a good thing or a bad thing that no one's finding any problems :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

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                                    • braden H
                                      braden H last edited by

                                      Inking begins! SO MUCH INKING!

                                      In fact so much colouring.

                                      I'm hoping to have inks done tomorrow and then paint over the weekend πŸ™‚

                                      If all else fails, I can turn it in as black and white :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

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                                      • KathrynAdebayo
                                        KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                                        Braden, this is so funny and amazing! I’d double check the steering wheel lining up with the orientation of the bus. Can’t wait to see this progress... I could look at all the details for hours. πŸ™‚

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                                        • braden H
                                          braden H @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                                          @KathrynAdebayo AHA!

                                          I knew there was somethin' buggin' me about the bus driver!

                                          I will totally fix that. Thank you πŸ˜ƒ

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                                          • Coley
                                            Coley @braden H last edited by

                                            @Braden-Hallett ha ha, it's a good thing! I'm totally entranced by it and can't stop looking at it πŸ™‚

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