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    September prompt WIP. Feedback always welcome :)

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    • braden H
      braden H last edited by

      Thanks everyone 🍑 (I meant to do a smiley face but I'm keeping whatever the hell that thing is) πŸ˜ƒ

      I'm surprised it's the middle one! But that's probably because I identify with #3 more as an ex substitute teacher :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

      Middle one it is! I may do a spread to extend the train of weird stuff πŸ™‚

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      • braden H
        braden H last edited by

        I decided this was a good candidate for a spread (and also, I don't have any spreads in my portfolio...) πŸ™‚

        Rough sketch, basic value study, and a couple of colour studies.

        I'm going with the one with the orange bus (it's closer to a real school bus colour and isn't so vibratey colour-wise.

        My plan with the colour choices (I wanted LOTS of colours.) is to start with red on the left, and then gradually go around the colour wheel with green on the right. Then we pop up to yellow for the bird cage and street sign and finally orange for the bus. And then in flows round and round (I hope πŸ™‚ )

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        • braden H
          braden H last edited by

          And my goal for artistic development at the moment is work lighter and brighter in general. I have the bad habit of going dark and grey given half a chance πŸ™‚

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          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

            @Braden-Hallett this already looks great! I really like where you’re going with the color!

            Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
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            • Coley
              Coley @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett wow it's already totally awesome

              https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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              • holleywilliamson
                holleywilliamson SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett I love the contrast and dark!

                https://www.instagram.com/holleywilliamsonart/
                http://holleywilliamson.com

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                • braden H
                  braden H last edited by

                  Sketch! So many kids! I fit in my webcomic characters and a few of the kids from my grade 5 practicum class πŸ™‚ Tryin' to push sizes and shapes!

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                  • Chip Valecek
                    Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett looking great! So many lil people to paint. Love that shark in the tank LOL


                    https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
                    https://www.facebook.com/cvalecek
                    http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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                    • theprairiefox
                      theprairiefox last edited by

                      @Braden-Hallett it is looking good. I love all the faces and expressions. Makes the piece stand out!

                      -The Prairie Fox
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                      https://www.theprairiefox.com

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                      • braden H
                        braden H last edited by

                        @Chip-Valecek @theprairiefox @holleywilliamson @Coley @Nyrryl-Cadiz

                        Thanks for the feedback everyone πŸ™‚

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                        • braden H
                          braden H last edited by

                          Phew! Ready for inks! I think I'm happy with the variety of kids and poses.

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                          • Erin.Cortese
                            Erin.Cortese Moderator @braden H last edited by

                            @Braden-Hallett In loooove with this composition! It is so much fun!

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                            • Coley
                              Coley @braden H last edited by

                              @Braden-Hallett yes this is totally awesome!

                              https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                              • braden H
                                braden H last edited by

                                @Erin-Cortese @Coley Thanks! πŸ˜ƒ I never know whether it's a good thing or a bad thing that no one's finding any problems :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

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                                • braden H
                                  braden H last edited by

                                  Inking begins! SO MUCH INKING!

                                  In fact so much colouring.

                                  I'm hoping to have inks done tomorrow and then paint over the weekend πŸ™‚

                                  If all else fails, I can turn it in as black and white :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes:

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                                  • KathrynAdebayo
                                    KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                                    Braden, this is so funny and amazing! I’d double check the steering wheel lining up with the orientation of the bus. Can’t wait to see this progress... I could look at all the details for hours. πŸ™‚

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                                    • braden H
                                      braden H @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                                      @KathrynAdebayo AHA!

                                      I knew there was somethin' buggin' me about the bus driver!

                                      I will totally fix that. Thank you πŸ˜ƒ

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                                      • Coley
                                        Coley @braden H last edited by

                                        @Braden-Hallett ha ha, it's a good thing! I'm totally entranced by it and can't stop looking at it πŸ™‚

                                        https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                        • ArtofAleksey
                                          ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                          Profile drawing! Great idea. I love that it’s also not in a classroom setting.

                                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                          alekseyillustration.com

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                            @Aleksey And the 'she' is not a student πŸ™‚

                                            I'm happier with the profile perspective than I thought I'd be. The right tool for the right job I guess πŸ™‚

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