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    • burvantill
      burvantill Moderator last edited by

      YardCarSketch.jpg
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      This is the sketch for my vehicle design final and my thumbnails. I'm going to do a finished drawing with environment and characters but wanted to post the vehicle here in its raw state. My plan is to have moss, grass and trees growing all around it. And rabbits using it as a home/ playground.

      Lisa Burvant
      www.lisaburvant.com
      Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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      • baileyvidler
        baileyvidler last edited by

        Here's my assignment 1, part 1! Drawing cars wasn't quite as intimidating as I thought it would be.

        Caricature-5.JPG

        Bailey Vidler
        Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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        • baileyvidler
          baileyvidler @burvantill last edited by

          @burvantill This is super cute! Did you end up finishing the piece?

          Bailey Vidler
          Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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          • burvantill
            burvantill Moderator @baileyvidler last edited by

            @baileymvidler I’m still working on it. A little bit whenever I have time. The rabbits are done and now I’m starting on the moss. Lol! It’s developed a life of its own. I’ll post my progress in the June virtual studio tonight. πŸ™‚

            PS your black line cars are super coolπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

            Lisa Burvant
            www.lisaburvant.com
            Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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            • Joe King
              Joe King @shanehunt last edited by

              @shanehunt Here's my aircraft for Assignment 5 inspired by a sewing machine. Went through a second set of silhouettes after deciding on my non-vehicle inspiration and I think that helped. Used the bobbin holder mechanism as an inspiration for the little ships to keep with the theme. Really enjoying the course. This is my first post so hopefully it's in the right spot and goes up ok.
              Instagram @justjoekingjr
              SVS Vehicle Assignment 5.jpg

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              • Mairin Kareli
                Mairin Kareli @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                @ArtofAleksey wow! Love the shape of the house/cabin and the texture of the wood. NICE

                https://www.instagram.com/mairinkareli/

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey @Mairin Kareli last edited by

                  @Mairin-Kareli oh thanks!

                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • burvantill
                    burvantill Moderator last edited by

                    I'm finally done!! ...Well, I'm calling it at least. Finished not perfect, right?
                    My vehicle design final. It took me so long because I've been practicing my digital skills at the same time. I not only wanted a vehicle design image, but a full illustration that I could use in my portfolio. I'm content. πŸ™‚

                    YardCar lr.jpg

                    Lisa Burvant
                    www.lisaburvant.com
                    Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                    • TessaW
                      TessaW @burvantill last edited by

                      @burvantill This deserves some applause! πŸ‘πŸ½ πŸ‘πŸ½ πŸ‘πŸ½ It's such a dreamy magical atmosphere with such a fun scenario!

                      Website: www.tessawrathall.com

                      Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                      • burvantill
                        burvantill Moderator @TessaW last edited by

                        @TessaW Thankyou very much. 😊

                        Lisa Burvant
                        www.lisaburvant.com
                        Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                        • shanehunt
                          shanehunt @Joe King last edited by

                          @Joe-King I really like it, Joe! Great idea and solid execution. I think you just need to tighten up your perspective accuracy with things like the front curve of the ship and the engines. Nice job.

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                          • shanehunt
                            shanehunt @Jeremy Ross last edited by

                            @Jeremy-Ross Hey Jeremy, sorry I haven't responded sooner. I wasn't getting notifications that I was getting tagged! I love your work ethic and all the designs you're pushing through. I'd love to see some of these without color, though. The colors and shading are a bit distracting from the designs. The other comment I'd make is that your line weights are all kinda uniform. Consider varying up your line weights to define the most important shapes and then stuff like the little polygon defining lines on this car could be much thinner and maybe even vanishing occasionally.

                            Great work!

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                            • shanehunt
                              shanehunt @burvantill last edited by

                              @burvantill Really solid work. Loving your use of contrast to emphasize your focal point. I do wish the car wasn't getting quite so lost in the composition. Nice job.

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                              • burvantill
                                burvantill Moderator @shanehunt last edited by

                                @shanehunt Thank you! Even though this was my vehicle design final I wanted the vehicle to be more of a backdrop to the story. I still had a blast doing it though. Thank you for the good direction throughout. πŸ™‚

                                Lisa Burvant
                                www.lisaburvant.com
                                Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                                • Jeremy Ross
                                  Jeremy Ross @shanehunt last edited by

                                  Hi @shanehunt, thank you so much for the feedback and tips! Will definitely work on improving line weight.

                                  https://www.instagram.com/jeremyrayross
                                  https://www.jeremyrayross.com/
                                  https://twitter.com/jeremyrayross
                                  https://jeremyrayross.substack.com/

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                                  • jsnzart
                                    jsnzart last edited by

                                    I am really enjoying this course, and assignments.
                                    Thanks @shanehunt

                                    Made my own thread, but it feels kinda lonely😯

                                    You guys and gals are doing great!

                                    Assignment 1.
                                    JKF-effectivevehiclesAss1.png

                                    https://jsn.artstation.com
                                    https://www.instagram.com/jsnzart/

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                                    • shanehunt
                                      shanehunt @jsnzart last edited by

                                      @jsnzart Hey, these are looking great! Loving the dynamic proportion variations.

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                                      • ambiirae
                                        ambiirae last edited by

                                        Wow Just looking through these you guys have done some amazing work! I love seeing all the variations of the vehicles and the different interpretations. Cant wait to take this course looks like a lot of fun.

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                                        • jsnzart
                                          jsnzart @shanehunt last edited by

                                          @shanehunt Thank you.

                                          https://jsn.artstation.com
                                          https://www.instagram.com/jsnzart/

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                                          • jsnzart
                                            jsnzart last edited by

                                            Assignment 2.
                                            I should have put more thought into it from the beginning.
                                            The Flintstones is too challenging!
                                            Simple, but, too simple!
                                            Just rock and wood.

                                            Anyway, I understand form and function.
                                            JKF-EffectiveVehicleDes_Ass2.png

                                            1. Fred's new ride is a pickup truck, for the main purpose of shopping for Rex Ribs, etc.
                                            2. A tank.
                                            3. A wheelchair.
                                            4. A square block of rock, on wheels.

                                            https://jsn.artstation.com
                                            https://www.instagram.com/jsnzart/

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