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    • Kim Hunter
      Kim Hunter @ArtofAleksey last edited by

      @ArtofAleksey

      Your drawing looks really cool but there are a few technical flaws, if it matters.

      I used to race a Hobie Cat with my dad. It's been many years but what you drew looks a lot like a jib sail. A jib is attached in front of the mast and behaves kind of like a parachute to catch the wind then the wind speed is coming from behind the boat.

      The front edge of the jib attaches to a cable, I believe called a stay that runs from the top of the mast to the bow of the boat, to make one side of a triangle. The free corner of the triangle has a rope, called a sheet, on it and that attaches through a block and tackle to the deck. The sail is sheeted in and out by tightening the rope or letting it out.

      A main sail would be a right triangle on the back side of the mast with the vertical side attached to the mast and a pole called the boom holding the bottom of the sail straight. Just as the cartoons depict, when you change direction (tack) the boom will swing across the deck and smack you in the head if you're not fast enough.

      The pontoons look like a reed boat which would likely have ropes binding the reeds and holding the curve of the bow. However that rope would never be attached to the block and tackle holding the sheets for a sail.

      The block and tackle holding the sheets slides from side to side on a rail attached to the deck, depending on which side the wind is coming from.

      Finally, the ramp/steps on the bow of the boat would catch the bow wave created by the movement of the boat through the water and weight the front end, pulling it under water and possibly causing the boat to pitch-pole forward and turtle, ie, land upside down in the water.

      I've given you enough vocabulary words to google. Hope it helps. And it is a cool looking picture.

      Finally, this stirred a lot of wonderful memories of sailing on Lake Michigan with my dad. Thank you for that. He passed in 2016 but we had good times. Cheers!

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      • ArtofAleksey
        ArtofAleksey @Kim Hunter last edited by ArtofAleksey

        @Kim-Hunter ya lost me..not sure where but somewhere ya lost me. I would really like to learn this though. Is there a good diagram that you know of you would be willing to recommend so i can have a visual to match your descriptions? Im def gonna google this a bit at a time though.

        im sorry to hear he passed. Im glad you had great adventures together.

        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
        alekseyillustration.com

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        • Kim Hunter
          Kim Hunter last edited by

          Thanks. google how to rig a sailboat

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          • shanehunt
            shanehunt @ArtofAleksey last edited by

            @ArtofAleksey Kim brings up a valid point: it’s worth taking the time to understand the basic mechanics of your subject. But at the same time, it’s unrealistic to expect exactly accurate engineering down to the smallest detail. As your drawing moves closer to the abstract/cartoon, the engineering (in this case, the sail rigging) will be more and more simplified. But when your drawing is more on the representational side of the spectrum, accuracy becomes more and more important. Your drawing is probably on the side of representational and therefore should probably reflect a more accurate rigging assembly.

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            • shanehunt
              shanehunt @ArtofAleksey last edited by

              @ArtofAleksey Sorry, one more thing... Remember, the main point of all this is to keep the viewer engaged in the story. Inaccuracies can distract knowledgeable viewers and pull them out of your stories.

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              • Coley
                Coley @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                @ArtofAleksey I think this is totally awesome. You gonna put it on instagram?!

                https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                • ArtofAleksey
                  ArtofAleksey @shanehunt last edited by

                  @shanehunt @Kim-Hunter ok cool I can definitely work on that.

                  @Coley yes 🙂

                  instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                  alekseyillustration.com

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                  • ArtofAleksey
                    ArtofAleksey last edited by ArtofAleksey

                    Ok for my last assignment i wanted to make one of those old timey 4x4 with the wooden wagon and those 1920s wheels and put one of those fantasy engines on the back. I’m trying to play around with the balance because the back definitely feels heavy so i put a truck exhaust closer to the front. I think i can do more with the Caricature of the design. Heres a rough sketch of the idea. I might try a few more silhouettes. I think i might also change it from a 20s truck to a 50s truck because Shanes ecample was a 20s vehicle.
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                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                    alekseyillustration.com

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                    • ArtofAleksey
                      ArtofAleksey last edited by

                      Ok i think the 1950s is definitely preferable CE31B13B-2111-48C6-BD62-087F33DFF90F.jpeg

                      instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                      alekseyillustration.com

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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        Trying a different ink pen. I want to put a weird crystal thing in the glass chamber on the back.
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                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                        alekseyillustration.com

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                        • ArtofAleksey
                          ArtofAleksey last edited by

                          Yay it’s done!
                          Thanks for the fun course @shanehunt
                          I think i gotta go do The light and shadow course by @Lee-White had trouble with the light crystal thing.
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                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                          alekseyillustration.com

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                          • burvantill
                            burvantill Moderator last edited by

                            My portfolio lacks vehicles. I’m thinking this needs to be remedied. I’ve finished the environment class so now I have time for vehicles.
                            @shanehunt, I have no questions yet, just sharing. Your videos and assignments are very understandable 👍👍👍. I’m having fun and it’s blowing my mind that I just drew 4 cars and didn’t stress over it. 😂
                            Assignment 1 part 1
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                            Lisa Burvant
                            www.lisaburvant.com
                            Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                            • ArtofAleksey
                              ArtofAleksey @burvantill last edited by ArtofAleksey

                              @burvantill ooo I like these very lively. May I offer critiques?

                              instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                              alekseyillustration.com

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                              • burvantill
                                burvantill Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                @ArtofAleksey Thankyou. Sure. 😃

                                Lisa Burvant
                                www.lisaburvant.com
                                Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                                • burvantill
                                  burvantill Moderator last edited by burvantill

                                  Weak and Strong
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                                  My Weak looks like a broken Stingray. Lol

                                  Lisa Burvant
                                  www.lisaburvant.com
                                  Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                                  • ArtofAleksey
                                    ArtofAleksey @burvantill last edited by

                                    @burvantill yeah i think redrawing the weak car in the same confidence you did the strong one would make it easier for you to see things that are and arent working.

                                    instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                    alekseyillustration.com

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                                    • burvantill
                                      burvantill Moderator last edited by

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                                      I redid my Weak car... better @ArtofAleksey? 😬

                                      Lisa Burvant
                                      www.lisaburvant.com
                                      Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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                                      • ArtofAleksey
                                        ArtofAleksey @burvantill last edited by

                                        @burvantill yes! Flat tires are a nice touch

                                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                        alekseyillustration.com

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                                        • Coley
                                          Coley @burvantill last edited by

                                          @burvantill flat tires. What a stroke of genius! Very cool

                                          https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                          • NicolaSchofield
                                            NicolaSchofield last edited by NicolaSchofield

                                            I decided I’m going to include a vehicle in my entry for the March contest so it’s a good time to do the vehicle design course! Here are my caricatures for the first assignment. I feel maybe I could have pushed them a bit further so will try to keep that in mind as I move on to the stance part of the first assignment.

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                                            Nicola Schofield

                                            Twitter: twitter.com/NSchofieldArt
                                            Instagram: instagram.com/NicolaSchofieldArt/

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