September WIP | Squid Ink Fairy | Requesting Feedback

[Gabby Correia]

Amazing! Such an out of the box idea. Love it! I am really drawn to #5 but I think #3 shows more of the octopus and I think that works beter compositionally as well.

[erinrew]

Super love your concept! For me I like 2 the best, it seems to be the moment before the action and allows for my own imagination to fill the gaps.

[miranda-hoover]

@Gabby-Correia & @erinrew Thank you!

[miranda-hoover]

Thought this would be a good stage to show my progress. It's still a sketch (I had a bit of a battle with the plants), and I haven't sorted out my values just yet. I took @JoshuaDages awesome idea and added in some more cameras, and if I have the time, I'll try to make each camera look different. I also changed the position of the fairy and the text (from thumbnail #3 ) and I was curious if this works better. Also, any thoughts on the font choice?

[JoshuaDages]

@miranda-hoover I love the way this is coming out! Great job!

[miranda-hoover]

@JoshuaDages Yay! Thank you!

[mamadraw]

@miranda-hoover I think the new positioning of the text/fairy is much better. I really love this one, sweet concept and really nice design!

[miranda-hoover]

@mamadraw Oh good! Thank you for the feedback

[Coley]

It’s wonderful. I love everything about it. You have some mad skills, girl!

[Mary Toth]

@miranda-hoover omg I am in love with this! I can't wait to see the final image!

[miranda-hoover]

Thank you so much @Coley & @Mary-Toth