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    September WIP | Squid Ink Fairy | Requesting Feedback

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    • Heather Boyd
      Heather Boyd @miranda-hoover last edited by

      @miranda-hoover I really love 3, and 5. 3 being my favorite because there is a curiosity and apprehensiveness.

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      • miranda-hoover
        miranda-hoover last edited by

        @Jacy13 @Rachel-Horne @deborah-Haagenson @eriberart @Lovsey @Wouter-Pasman @JoshuaDages @Melanie-Ortins @K-Flagg @Gary-Wilkinson @Nyrryl-Cadiz @Heather-Boyd
        Thank you all for your great feedback! It's been super helpful πŸ’› Think I'll go forward with #3 for this one.

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        • miranda-hoover
          miranda-hoover @JoshuaDages last edited by

          @JoshuaDages 🀯 That is a great idea! Thank you!

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          • Gabby Correia
            Gabby Correia last edited by

            Amazing! Such an out of the box idea. Love it! I am really drawn to #5 but I think #3 shows more of the octopus and I think that works beter compositionally as well.

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            • erinrew
              erinrew last edited by

              Super love your concept! For me I like 2 the best, it seems to be the moment before the action and allows for my own imagination to fill the gaps.

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              • miranda-hoover
                miranda-hoover @Gabby Correia last edited by

                @Gabby-Correia & @erinrew Thank you! πŸ’š

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                • miranda-hoover
                  miranda-hoover last edited by

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                  Thought this would be a good stage to show my progress. It's still a sketch (I had a bit of a battle with the plants), and I haven't sorted out my values just yet. I took @JoshuaDages awesome idea and added in some more cameras, and if I have the time, I'll try to make each camera look different. I also changed the position of the fairy and the text (from thumbnail #3 ☝) and I was curious if this works better. Also, any thoughts on the font choice?

                  https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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                  • JoshuaDages
                    JoshuaDages @miranda-hoover last edited by

                    @miranda-hoover I love the way this is coming out! Great job!

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                    • miranda-hoover
                      miranda-hoover @JoshuaDages last edited by

                      @JoshuaDages Yay! Thank you!

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                      • mamadraw
                        mamadraw @miranda-hoover last edited by

                        @miranda-hoover I think the new positioning of the text/fairy is much better. I really love this one, sweet concept and really nice design!

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                        • miranda-hoover
                          miranda-hoover @mamadraw last edited by

                          @mamadraw Oh good! Thank you for the feedback πŸ’™

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                          • Coley
                            Coley last edited by

                            It’s wonderful. I love everything about it. You have some mad skills, girl!

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                            • Mary Toth
                              Mary Toth @miranda-hoover last edited by

                              @miranda-hoover omg I am in love with this! I can't wait to see the final image!

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                              • miranda-hoover
                                miranda-hoover @Coley last edited by

                                Thank you so much @Coley & @Mary-Toth 😊 πŸ’›

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