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    • lizardillo
      lizardillo last edited by

      After a few more rounds I've settle on this (give or take a few extra flowers, some size and positioning tweaks to try and make it read better and the foreground is a bit messy with too much stuff). I'm away at the weekend so I only have a few hours to do it between now and then. I messed about so much I've not left much time 😬

      Thanks everyone

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      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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      • lizardillo
        lizardillo last edited by

        The battle is going on in an idyllic english meadow a bit like the two hares in the top right pic (as we are encouraged to plant wildflowers in the UK to help the bees).
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        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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        • Sabrina Gosselin
          Sabrina Gosselin last edited by

          Can I just say how I love that you shared your whole, and I mean, WHOLE process for this project? So awesome 🙂

          Sabrina Gosselin

          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/sabbygimagery/
          Website (currently a WIP): https://sabbygimagery.com/

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          • brettb_draws
            brettb_draws @lizardillo last edited by

            @lizardillo This is looking really nice so far! Besides the great character designs, I really love how clear your silhouettes are. I can already imagine how cool it's gonna look when it's coloured. Excited to see it when it's done !

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            • lizardillo
              lizardillo last edited by

              Thank you all for all of the help this month. It’s truly appreciated. Here is the final. I’ve struggled a bit so it’s not quite how I wanted it in the end, I also lightened it a bit at the last minute and probably shouldn’t have. I’ve not done many full environments do this is a learning curve. Thanks once again.

              I’m away in a campervan so hopefully this will upload from my phone. 👍

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              Website: lizardillo.co.uk
              IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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              • Valerie Light
                Valerie Light last edited by

                Your style is so cute and so consistent, @lizardillo . I like the way you're controlling value from foreground to background. You've done a great job of creating a narrative that builds as it moves back in space. Nice work!

                www.valerielightillustration.com
                www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                • ajillustrates
                  ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                  @lizardillo Dope to the nth-degree!

                  https://ajillustrates.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                  • K.Flagg
                    K.Flagg @lizardillo last edited by K.Flagg

                    @lizardillo I really love the way you use color. And I really hope if I make top 16 again that you are in the other bracket 😛

                    K.Flagg

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                    • lizardillo
                      lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                      Thanks all. This has been a tough one for me as I never draw backgrounds, it’s been a great learning exercise. My partner who is a physics teacher keeps telling me the mound of honey is too tall, it’s really annoying him 😂 (I know it is too tall but reality is boring 😂).

                      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                      • ajillustrates
                        ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                        @lizardillo My brain kept telling me the same thing about the honey, but I told it to shut up and enjoy the art 😉

                        https://ajillustrates.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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