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    Buzzbee's sticky or not-so-sticky situation – WIP

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    • Valerie Light
      Valerie Light @lizardillo last edited by

      @lizardillo This is awesome. You expressions and motion is great. Haven't you just gone from never before designing a character to nailing like 3 contests in a row? Looking forward to having you as a classmate in the cb pro class!

      www.valerielightillustration.com
      www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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      • lizardillo
        lizardillo @Valerie Light last edited by

        @Valerie-Light Thank you. I had never designed a human character, only not very stylised animals or birds. I can't draw people or faces. I had originally tried to make the character a boy or girl to try and force myself to create a stylised child, but one thing led to another it ended up as a bee! I think I'm destined never to draw humans.

        This is Buzzbee's last adventure. He's retiring after this prompt.

        Looking forward to CBP too, we're going to have fun. I still have no idea if children's books are for me but it's worth trying.

        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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        • lizardillo
          lizardillo @K.Flagg last edited by

          @K-Flagg thanks. I was originally trying to make it all about pre-event suspense, but hey, it's his last outing in the prompts so he can have some fun and go out with a bang! 🐝 🍯

          Website: lizardillo.co.uk
          IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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          • lizardillo
            lizardillo last edited by

            After a few more rounds I've settle on this (give or take a few extra flowers, some size and positioning tweaks to try and make it read better and the foreground is a bit messy with too much stuff). I'm away at the weekend so I only have a few hours to do it between now and then. I messed about so much I've not left much time 😬

            Thanks everyone

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            Website: lizardillo.co.uk
            IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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            • lizardillo
              lizardillo last edited by

              The battle is going on in an idyllic english meadow a bit like the two hares in the top right pic (as we are encouraged to plant wildflowers in the UK to help the bees).
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              Website: lizardillo.co.uk
              IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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              • Sabrina Gosselin
                Sabrina Gosselin last edited by

                Can I just say how I love that you shared your whole, and I mean, WHOLE process for this project? So awesome 🙂

                Sabrina Gosselin

                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/sabbygimagery/
                Website (currently a WIP): https://sabbygimagery.com/

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                • brettb_draws
                  brettb_draws @lizardillo last edited by

                  @lizardillo This is looking really nice so far! Besides the great character designs, I really love how clear your silhouettes are. I can already imagine how cool it's gonna look when it's coloured. Excited to see it when it's done !

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                  • lizardillo
                    lizardillo last edited by

                    Thank you all for all of the help this month. It’s truly appreciated. Here is the final. I’ve struggled a bit so it’s not quite how I wanted it in the end, I also lightened it a bit at the last minute and probably shouldn’t have. I’ve not done many full environments do this is a learning curve. Thanks once again.

                    I’m away in a campervan so hopefully this will upload from my phone. 👍

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                    Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                    IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                    • Valerie Light
                      Valerie Light last edited by

                      Your style is so cute and so consistent, @lizardillo . I like the way you're controlling value from foreground to background. You've done a great job of creating a narrative that builds as it moves back in space. Nice work!

                      www.valerielightillustration.com
                      www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                      • ajillustrates
                        ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                        @lizardillo Dope to the nth-degree!

                        https://ajillustrates.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                        • K.Flagg
                          K.Flagg @lizardillo last edited by K.Flagg

                          @lizardillo I really love the way you use color. And I really hope if I make top 16 again that you are in the other bracket 😛

                          K.Flagg

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                          • lizardillo
                            lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                            Thanks all. This has been a tough one for me as I never draw backgrounds, it’s been a great learning exercise. My partner who is a physics teacher keeps telling me the mound of honey is too tall, it’s really annoying him 😂 (I know it is too tall but reality is boring 😂).

                            Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                            IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                            • ajillustrates
                              ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                              @lizardillo My brain kept telling me the same thing about the honey, but I told it to shut up and enjoy the art 😉

                              https://ajillustrates.com
                              https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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