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    Buzzbee's sticky or not-so-sticky situation – WIP

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    • lizardillo
      lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

      @Melissa-Bailey-0 I turned the head around and it looked much better thanks.
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      ...then that got me thinking... as he was looking at the hornets I thought about what @Georgios-Christopoulos said about turning the tables on the enemy.

      In YET ANOTHER change of direction I have decided that he is attacking the hornets and the hornets are in such a sticky mess they are retreating.

      I have one last decision to make and that’s whether the honey is being flung at the hornets via the catapult he has on his belt (hopefully no one will notice it’s about three times it’s original size😂) or by jumping on the end of his honey stick (‘with a huge pile of honey on there that he was carrying in his backpack (bought from the Buzz Inn) - hence the empty jars.

      Thank you for such a team effort with this.

      This is the last time I will change my mind and I promise 😂

      Thanks again

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      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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      • ajillustrates
        ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

        @lizardillo Run with it!!!

        https://ajillustrates.com
        https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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        • Georgios Christopoulos
          Georgios Christopoulos @lizardillo last edited by

          @lizardillo this is it. Both unexpected, heroic and really awesome overall. Keep it up!

          Instagram : https://www.instagram.com/g.chris.artwork/
          Deviantart : https://www.deviantart.com/g-chris

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          • lizardillo
            lizardillo @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by lizardillo

            @ajillustrates @Georgios-Christopoulos thank you 👍

            I think there’s steam coming off my brain after all of this! 🤯😄

            Website: lizardillo.co.uk
            IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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            • Melissa_Bailey
              Melissa_Bailey @lizardillo last edited by

              @lizardillo LOVING this direction, and how you turned the tables on the enemy! Way to make your character heroic.

              (This month's prompt is making you the poster child for @Lee-White's "50 Thumbnails"!) 😂

              illustrator - author - smiley person
              mbaileyart.com
              instagram.com/mbaileyart/

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              • lizardillo
                lizardillo @Melissa_Bailey last edited by

                @Melissa-Bailey-0 thank you. I think I was one thumbnail away from curling up in a ball and hiding in a corner 🤣

                Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                • K.Flagg
                  K.Flagg @lizardillo last edited by

                  @lizardillo I think the new one makes more sense! Love this idea of the Bee character being the hero.

                  K.Flagg

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                  • Valerie Light
                    Valerie Light @lizardillo last edited by

                    @lizardillo This is awesome. You expressions and motion is great. Haven't you just gone from never before designing a character to nailing like 3 contests in a row? Looking forward to having you as a classmate in the cb pro class!

                    www.valerielightillustration.com
                    www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                    • lizardillo
                      lizardillo @Valerie Light last edited by

                      @Valerie-Light Thank you. I had never designed a human character, only not very stylised animals or birds. I can't draw people or faces. I had originally tried to make the character a boy or girl to try and force myself to create a stylised child, but one thing led to another it ended up as a bee! I think I'm destined never to draw humans.

                      This is Buzzbee's last adventure. He's retiring after this prompt.

                      Looking forward to CBP too, we're going to have fun. I still have no idea if children's books are for me but it's worth trying.

                      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                      • lizardillo
                        lizardillo @K.Flagg last edited by

                        @K-Flagg thanks. I was originally trying to make it all about pre-event suspense, but hey, it's his last outing in the prompts so he can have some fun and go out with a bang! 🐝 🍯

                        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                        • lizardillo
                          lizardillo last edited by

                          After a few more rounds I've settle on this (give or take a few extra flowers, some size and positioning tweaks to try and make it read better and the foreground is a bit messy with too much stuff). I'm away at the weekend so I only have a few hours to do it between now and then. I messed about so much I've not left much time 😬

                          Thanks everyone

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                          Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                          IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                          • lizardillo
                            lizardillo last edited by

                            The battle is going on in an idyllic english meadow a bit like the two hares in the top right pic (as we are encouraged to plant wildflowers in the UK to help the bees).
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                            Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                            IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                            • Sabrina Gosselin
                              Sabrina Gosselin last edited by

                              Can I just say how I love that you shared your whole, and I mean, WHOLE process for this project? So awesome 🙂

                              Sabrina Gosselin

                              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/sabbygimagery/
                              Website (currently a WIP): https://sabbygimagery.com/

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                              • brettb_draws
                                brettb_draws @lizardillo last edited by

                                @lizardillo This is looking really nice so far! Besides the great character designs, I really love how clear your silhouettes are. I can already imagine how cool it's gonna look when it's coloured. Excited to see it when it's done !

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                                • lizardillo
                                  lizardillo last edited by

                                  Thank you all for all of the help this month. It’s truly appreciated. Here is the final. I’ve struggled a bit so it’s not quite how I wanted it in the end, I also lightened it a bit at the last minute and probably shouldn’t have. I’ve not done many full environments do this is a learning curve. Thanks once again.

                                  I’m away in a campervan so hopefully this will upload from my phone. 👍

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                                  Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                  IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                  • Valerie Light
                                    Valerie Light last edited by

                                    Your style is so cute and so consistent, @lizardillo . I like the way you're controlling value from foreground to background. You've done a great job of creating a narrative that builds as it moves back in space. Nice work!

                                    www.valerielightillustration.com
                                    www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                                    • ajillustrates
                                      ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                                      @lizardillo Dope to the nth-degree!

                                      https://ajillustrates.com
                                      https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                                      • K.Flagg
                                        K.Flagg @lizardillo last edited by K.Flagg

                                        @lizardillo I really love the way you use color. And I really hope if I make top 16 again that you are in the other bracket 😛

                                        K.Flagg

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                                        • lizardillo
                                          lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                                          Thanks all. This has been a tough one for me as I never draw backgrounds, it’s been a great learning exercise. My partner who is a physics teacher keeps telling me the mound of honey is too tall, it’s really annoying him 😂 (I know it is too tall but reality is boring 😂).

                                          Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                                          IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                                          • ajillustrates
                                            ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                                            @lizardillo My brain kept telling me the same thing about the honey, but I told it to shut up and enjoy the art 😉

                                            https://ajillustrates.com
                                            https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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