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    • lizardillo
      lizardillo @K.Flagg last edited by

      @K-Flagg thanks. I was originally trying to make it all about pre-event suspense, but hey, it's his last outing in the prompts so he can have some fun and go out with a bang! 🐝 🍯

      Website: lizardillo.co.uk
      IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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      • lizardillo
        lizardillo last edited by

        After a few more rounds I've settle on this (give or take a few extra flowers, some size and positioning tweaks to try and make it read better and the foreground is a bit messy with too much stuff). I'm away at the weekend so I only have a few hours to do it between now and then. I messed about so much I've not left much time 😬

        Thanks everyone

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        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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        • lizardillo
          lizardillo last edited by

          The battle is going on in an idyllic english meadow a bit like the two hares in the top right pic (as we are encouraged to plant wildflowers in the UK to help the bees).
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          Website: lizardillo.co.uk
          IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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          • Sabrina Gosselin
            Sabrina Gosselin last edited by

            Can I just say how I love that you shared your whole, and I mean, WHOLE process for this project? So awesome 🙂

            Sabrina Gosselin

            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/sabbygimagery/
            Website (currently a WIP): https://sabbygimagery.com/

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            • brettb_draws
              brettb_draws @lizardillo last edited by

              @lizardillo This is looking really nice so far! Besides the great character designs, I really love how clear your silhouettes are. I can already imagine how cool it's gonna look when it's coloured. Excited to see it when it's done !

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              • lizardillo
                lizardillo last edited by

                Thank you all for all of the help this month. It’s truly appreciated. Here is the final. I’ve struggled a bit so it’s not quite how I wanted it in the end, I also lightened it a bit at the last minute and probably shouldn’t have. I’ve not done many full environments do this is a learning curve. Thanks once again.

                I’m away in a campervan so hopefully this will upload from my phone. 👍

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                Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                • Valerie Light
                  Valerie Light last edited by

                  Your style is so cute and so consistent, @lizardillo . I like the way you're controlling value from foreground to background. You've done a great job of creating a narrative that builds as it moves back in space. Nice work!

                  www.valerielightillustration.com
                  www.instagram.com/valerie_light_illustration

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                  • ajillustrates
                    ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                    @lizardillo Dope to the nth-degree!

                    https://ajillustrates.com
                    https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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                    • K.Flagg
                      K.Flagg @lizardillo last edited by K.Flagg

                      @lizardillo I really love the way you use color. And I really hope if I make top 16 again that you are in the other bracket 😛

                      K.Flagg

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                      • lizardillo
                        lizardillo last edited by lizardillo

                        Thanks all. This has been a tough one for me as I never draw backgrounds, it’s been a great learning exercise. My partner who is a physics teacher keeps telling me the mound of honey is too tall, it’s really annoying him 😂 (I know it is too tall but reality is boring 😂).

                        Website: lizardillo.co.uk
                        IG: instagram.com/lizardillo

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                        • ajillustrates
                          ajillustrates @lizardillo last edited by

                          @lizardillo My brain kept telling me the same thing about the honey, but I told it to shut up and enjoy the art 😉

                          https://ajillustrates.com
                          https://www.instagram.com/aj.illustrates/

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