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    • AngelinaKizz
      AngelinaKizz @kayleenartlover last edited by

      @kayleenartlover while I like this pov, I think Alice is too confident in her Body position. I think she’d be scared with the angry queen coming at her, and I think you can push her gesture to display what we can’t see on her face more.

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      • Mia Clarke
        Mia Clarke @kayleenartlover last edited by

        @kayleenartlover Love this one!

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        • kayleenartlover
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          Not quite sure how I can make Alice look more scared? Her hair is gonna cover her shrugged shoulders...

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              • Anna Johns
                Anna Johns last edited by

                @kayleenartlover said in Help Wanted: Redrawing a portfolio piece:

                So I made a character design for the Queen of Hearts in a Rococo style, and Lee White critiqued it in the "How to Fix Your Art" series. So now I'm picking it back up and gonna redraw it. But I need to know if it needs any changes or additions to be an interesting picture.

                It's great that you're revisiting your character design! To make it an interesting picture, consider adding intricate details to the Queen of Hearts' costume and incorporating elements that reflect her personality. Enhance the composition with dynamic poses or a compelling background. Experiment with color schemes and lighting to evoke the Rococo style. Overall, strive for a visually captivating portrayal that captures the essence of the Queen of Hearts.

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                • kayleenartlover
                  kayleenartlover last edited by

                  update: Alice is practically done, only took 4 hours 😅 hooray!
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                    • Chantal Goetheer
                      Chantal Goetheer @kayleenartlover last edited by

                      @kayleenartlover good job! Keep at it. Was just thinking how would it be if you would have Alice looking down or away a bit more? Since we don't really see her shoulders, since they are covered by her hair, she comes across more defiant than scared.

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                      • kayleenartlover
                        kayleenartlover last edited by

                        It’s so close to being done! I just need to figure out how to add a pattern detail to the skirt and see what type of lighting/shadows would look best if needed for this illustration.
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                        • allysa
                          allysa @kayleenartlover last edited by

                          @kayleenartlover this thread is so cool - all your changes are making this so so good, and it’s wonderful to follow along with the edits!

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                            • kayleenartlover
                              kayleenartlover last edited by kayleenartlover

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                              Yay or nay?

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                                      • kayleenartlover
                                        kayleenartlover last edited by

                                        I’m not quite sure which version I should put in my portfolio…

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                                        • kayleenartlover
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                                          I could also flip this image like this…

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                                          • kayleenartlover
                                            kayleenartlover last edited by

                                            Here is the “with text” version
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