Help Wanted: Redrawing a portfolio piece

[kayleenartlover]

update: Alice is practically done, only took 4 hours hooray!

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[Chantal Goetheer]

@kayleenartlover good job! Keep at it. Was just thinking how would it be if you would have Alice looking down or away a bit more? Since we don't really see her shoulders, since they are covered by her hair, she comes across more defiant than scared.

[kayleenartlover]

It’s so close to being done! I just need to figure out how to add a pattern detail to the skirt and see what type of lighting/shadows would look best if needed for this illustration.

[allysa]

@kayleenartlover this thread is so cool - all your changes are making this so so good, and it’s wonderful to follow along with the edits!

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Yay or nay?

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I’m not quite sure which version I should put in my portfolio…

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I could also flip this image like this…

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Here is the “with text” version

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Okay I need a vote. Which version looks better? Red or Gold?

[Robyn Hepburn]

@kayleenartlover I vote for gold. It's got more depth and variety.