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    Help Wanted: Redrawing a portfolio piece

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    • Chantal Goetheer
      Chantal Goetheer @kayleenartlover last edited by

      @kayleenartlover good job! Keep at it. Was just thinking how would it be if you would have Alice looking down or away a bit more? Since we don't really see her shoulders, since they are covered by her hair, she comes across more defiant than scared.

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      • kayleenartlover
        kayleenartlover last edited by

        It’s so close to being done! I just need to figure out how to add a pattern detail to the skirt and see what type of lighting/shadows would look best if needed for this illustration.
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        • allysa
          allysa @kayleenartlover last edited by

          @kayleenartlover this thread is so cool - all your changes are making this so so good, and it’s wonderful to follow along with the edits!

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            • kayleenartlover
              kayleenartlover last edited by kayleenartlover

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              Yay or nay?

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                      • kayleenartlover
                        kayleenartlover last edited by

                        I’m not quite sure which version I should put in my portfolio…

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                        • kayleenartlover
                          kayleenartlover last edited by

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                          I could also flip this image like this…

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                          • kayleenartlover
                            kayleenartlover last edited by

                            Here is the “with text” version
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                                  • kayleenartlover
                                    kayleenartlover last edited by

                                    Okay I need a vote. Which version looks better? Red or Gold?
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                                    • Robyn Hepburn
                                      Robyn Hepburn @kayleenartlover last edited by

                                      @kayleenartlover I vote for gold. It's got more depth and variety. 😃

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