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    • TessaW
      TessaW last edited by

      I don't have experience with creating or sending postcards, but from an aesthetic perspective it looks excellent to me. Great job!

      Website: www.tessawrathall.com

      Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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      • burvantill
        burvantill Moderator last edited by

        Ship it!

        Lisa Burvant
        www.lisaburvant.com
        Instagram & Twitter & SVS: @burvantill

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        • NatLundeen
          NatLundeen @braden H last edited by NatLundeen

          @Braden-Hallett said in Would you make any small changes to this postcard design?:

          I don't have anything helpful to add, just to say it looks awesome!

          Instagram: instagram.com/natlundeen/
          Website: www.natalielundeen.com

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          • romy
            romy last edited by

            Yepp, ship ship and away! Happy sailing, great work, nothing to add, kudos. πŸ‘

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            • Jeremy Ross
              Jeremy Ross @braden H last edited by

              Hi @Braden-Hallett, looks amazing. Love how your using the rope to catch an agent!

              The only thing I can think of is maybe adding a β€œThank You” as a watermark?

              Cheers!

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              • romy
                romy @Jeremy Ross last edited by romy

                @Jeremy-Ross Hehe, so does the fat passive bunny represent the agent? ^^

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                • T
                  TylerDraws last edited by

                  Gorgeous! Tiny graphic designer thing - maybe 1 more pt of leading between email address, website, social?

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                  • carriecopadraws
                    carriecopadraws SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett This is so great! I'd be thrilled to see this in my mail. I would only suggest having the contact info not bold (if only your name is bold it creates a nice contrast), and maybe give it more space between each line, they feel a little cramped.

                    Carrie Copa
                    https://carriecopadraws.com/

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                    • Norman Morana
                      Norman Morana last edited by

                      Killer! I really dig the fix on the front side. I have one more little nit pick XD This can be subjective, but the spot illustration feels a little cramped. I'm not sure where your safe areas are. I bumped them over to the right a bit and down a smidge. It felt a little more balanced and you can avoid getting the edge of you illustration cut off. Excited to see where these lead you!

                      Postcardback_edit.jpg

                      Onwards,

                      Norman

                      normanmoranaillustration.com
                      instagram.com/norman_morana/

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                      • braden H
                        braden H @Norman Morana last edited by

                        @Norman-Morana In this particular case, (though I agree with you)
                        I'm going by a USPS postcard template (address area should be X inches wide, barcode area should be Y inches high) so it's kinda jammed over to the side for the postal system πŸ™‚

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                        • braden H
                          braden H last edited by

                          Thanks everyone! I'll make a couple of changes to the font and then get it printed πŸ™‚

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                          • braden H
                            braden H last edited by

                            @Jeremy-Ross @romy I hadn't thought of it as catching a fat rabbit agent, but now I do, lol

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                            • Norman Morana
                              Norman Morana @braden H last edited by

                              @Braden-Hallett Oh that makes so much sense! It had seemed uncharacteristic haha. If you find it bugs you, maybe play with the scale a little. My day job is as a production artist, I can't help but see these little details πŸ˜…

                              I didn't pick up on this on my first read, but I love that the front is them chasing the rabbit and on the back we get the payoff. Very clever.

                              Onwards,

                              Norman

                              normanmoranaillustration.com
                              instagram.com/norman_morana/

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @Norman Morana last edited by

                                @Norman-Morana said in Would you make any small changes to this postcard design?:

                                I didn't pick up on this on my first read, but I love that the front is them chasing the rabbit and on the back we get the payoff. Very clever.

                                Thanks! Story telling is the whole idea, right?

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                                • Norman Morana
                                  Norman Morana @braden H last edited by

                                  @Braden-Hallett exactly!

                                  Onwards,

                                  Norman

                                  normanmoranaillustration.com
                                  instagram.com/norman_morana/

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