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    September WIP | Squid Ink Fairy | Requesting Feedback

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    • erinrew
      erinrew last edited by

      Super love your concept! For me I like 2 the best, it seems to be the moment before the action and allows for my own imagination to fill the gaps.

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      • miranda-hoover
        miranda-hoover @Gabby Correia last edited by

        @Gabby-Correia & @erinrew Thank you! πŸ’š

        https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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        • miranda-hoover
          miranda-hoover last edited by

          Screen Shot 2020-09-25 at 4.12.47 PM.png

          Thought this would be a good stage to show my progress. It's still a sketch (I had a bit of a battle with the plants), and I haven't sorted out my values just yet. I took @JoshuaDages awesome idea and added in some more cameras, and if I have the time, I'll try to make each camera look different. I also changed the position of the fairy and the text (from thumbnail #3 ☝) and I was curious if this works better. Also, any thoughts on the font choice?

          https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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          • JoshuaDages
            JoshuaDages @miranda-hoover last edited by

            @miranda-hoover I love the way this is coming out! Great job!

            Joshua Dages
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            • miranda-hoover
              miranda-hoover @JoshuaDages last edited by

              @JoshuaDages Yay! Thank you!

              https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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              • mamadraw
                mamadraw @miranda-hoover last edited by

                @miranda-hoover I think the new positioning of the text/fairy is much better. I really love this one, sweet concept and really nice design!

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                • miranda-hoover
                  miranda-hoover @mamadraw last edited by

                  @mamadraw Oh good! Thank you for the feedback πŸ’™

                  https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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                  • Coley
                    Coley last edited by

                    It’s wonderful. I love everything about it. You have some mad skills, girl!

                    https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                    • Mary Toth
                      Mary Toth @miranda-hoover last edited by

                      @miranda-hoover omg I am in love with this! I can't wait to see the final image!

                      https://www.instagram.com/marytothillustration/

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                      • miranda-hoover
                        miranda-hoover @Coley last edited by

                        Thank you so much @Coley & @Mary-Toth 😊 πŸ’›

                        https://www.instagram.com/mirananemone

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