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    Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?

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    • braden H
      braden H @burvantill last edited by

      @burvantill said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

      I love the little dude on the right.

      Ah yes. Skullmeister. No lines and very limited screen time, but totally steals the show, lol.

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      • braden H
        braden H @NessIllustration last edited by

        @NessIllustration said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

        When we look at it from afar, the cover isn't as eye catching as it could be

        I agree! Works-ish, but definitely not on the level of "LOOKATMELOOKATME!" which is what I want!

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        • braden H
          braden H @chrisaakins last edited by

          @chrisaakins said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

          If you wanted to you could push the intensity on the colors of his face and the alien's eyes but it's not necessary at all.

          I think i tend toward muted colours which can be good for interiors, but (based on feedback) not necessarily the best for covers. So I'm definitely gonna push 'em a bit more!

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          • NessIllustration
            NessIllustration Pro @braden H last edited by

            @Braden-Hallett Yeah I think it might be because you have a lot of middle gray tones. The updated version you posted has the large block of high contrast, which really makes it pop!

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            • braden H
              braden H @NessIllustration last edited by

              @NessIllustration said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

              @Braden-Hallett Yeah I think it might be because you have a lot of middle gray tones. The updated version you posted has the large block of high contrast, which really makes it pop!

              Awesome! Good to hear it's popping more πŸ˜ƒ

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              • carlianne
                carlianne @braden H last edited by

                have you explored making the dark area more purple than red? The purple green combo tends to have a cool eerie sci-fi feel to it, might be fun! πŸ™‚

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                • braden H
                  braden H @carlianne last edited by

                  @carlianne said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

                  have you explored making the dark area more purple than red? The purple green combo tends to have a cool eerie sci-fi feel to it, might be fun! πŸ™‚

                  See, the interesting thing is that to me that DOES look purple πŸ˜† Purple green is exactly what I was goin' for πŸ™‚

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                  • carlianne
                    carlianne @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett moooooooaaaaar

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                    • braden H
                      braden H @carlianne last edited by

                      @carlianne MOOOOOOAAAAAAR PUUUUUURPLLLLLLLLE!

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                      • APHOTICMOTH
                        APHOTICMOTH Moderator @braden H last edited by

                        @Braden-Hallett Looks purple to me, a little on the red side. Like Mullberry/Wine. I like it.

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                        • aska
                          aska @braden H last edited by

                          @Braden-Hallett looks really good now. I like that you made the bottom colour less greyish and more juicy. Purple works nice

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                          • Georgios Christopoulos
                            Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                            @Braden-Hallett Late to the party,but I think it works out fine.Maybe saturate th green a tad more.
                            Also love the letters! the handwritten format suits the cover so much!

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                            • braden H
                              braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                              @Georgios-Christopoulos said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

                              the handwritten format suits the cover so much!

                              Thanks! It turned out surprisingly well πŸ™‚

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                              • braden H
                                braden H last edited by

                                I think it's close to done πŸ™‚ Thanks for the feedback everyone!

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                                • burvantill
                                  burvantill Moderator @braden H last edited by

                                  @Braden-Hallett Nice. I like the saturation in the magenta. And the electric green details. Good color scheme. πŸ‘

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                                  • APHOTICMOTH
                                    APHOTICMOTH Moderator last edited by

                                    I liked the green text, but that's just me πŸ˜› Looking really nice.

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                                    • braden H
                                      braden H @burvantill last edited by

                                      @burvantill Dunno why but I love purple/grey/green πŸ™‚

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                                      • braden H
                                        braden H @APHOTICMOTH last edited by

                                        @CLCanadyArts said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

                                        I liked the green text, but that's just me πŸ˜› Looking really nice.

                                        It's still a possibility! It just reminds me too much of mint chocolate chip ice cream πŸ˜†

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                                        • lizardillo
                                          lizardillo @braden H last edited by lizardillo

                                          @Braden-Hallett I was just writing...

                                          β€œI really like the colours and dark foreground of this. From a graphic design perspective I also Iiked the title in green to help with the hierarchy of the text and help the title stand out when on a shelf (the accent colour green could tie the eyes/head circuit chip and title together if that makes sense).”

                                          ...but you have just done it before I pressed submit πŸ˜‚

                                          I like it in the green, I think it’s can be read and noticed easier. Whether the title is green or purple - I’m totally intrigued by what the story could be about by the cover as a whole.

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @lizardillo last edited by

                                            @lizardillo said in Cover rough critique! How do you feel about the colours?:

                                            Whether the title is green or purple - I’m totally intrigued by what the story could be about by the cover as a whole.

                                            That's good to hear πŸ˜ƒ I always have a hard time pinpointing what part of the story will make an interesting cover or if it'll just be weird, lol.

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