Buzzbee's sticky or not-so-sticky situation – WIP

lizardillo

@ajillustrates something like this? Please excuse the fact I’ve not used a proper perspective grid and there is absolutely no environment in this at all but it’s just for the concept idea. It might need a bit more of a dramatic angle such as an ant’s eye view ? It’s 9.40pm here in England so I’m calling it a night on this for tonight. Thanks again for the help

ajillustrates

@lizardillo Yeah, that looks great! And I think you're right, lowering the camera may create more drama because we'll see the wasps descending down onto the hero some more, while we'd be closer to her frustration with being stuck in the muck. And I never use a perspective grid, so no worries there

Melissa_Bailey

Really interesting! Loving that you’re sticking with your bee character.

One little suggestion: instead of looking at the honey, have the bee looking at the antagonist, as that is the greater threat. If I was in their place, while I would pay some attention to being stuck in honey, I think most of my attention would be on the hornet army.

Either way, you’ve got another winner here!

lizardillo

@Melissa-Bailey-0 I turned the head around and it looked much better thanks.

...then that got me thinking... as he was looking at the hornets I thought about what @Georgios-Christopoulos said about turning the tables on the enemy.

In YET ANOTHER change of direction I have decided that he is attacking the hornets and the hornets are in such a sticky mess they are retreating.

I have one last decision to make and that’s whether the honey is being flung at the hornets via the catapult he has on his belt (hopefully no one will notice it’s about three times it’s original size) or by jumping on the end of his honey stick (‘with a huge pile of honey on there that he was carrying in his backpack (bought from the Buzz Inn) - hence the empty jars.

Thank you for such a team effort with this.

This is the last time I will change my mind and I promise

Thanks again

ajillustrates

@lizardillo Run with it!!!

Georgios Christopoulos

@lizardillo this is it. Both unexpected, heroic and really awesome overall. Keep it up!

lizardillo

@ajillustrates @Georgios-Christopoulos thank you

I think there’s steam coming off my brain after all of this!

Melissa_Bailey

@lizardillo LOVING this direction, and how you turned the tables on the enemy! Way to make your character heroic.

(This month's prompt is making you the poster child for @Lee-White's "50 Thumbnails"!)

lizardillo

@Melissa-Bailey-0 thank you. I think I was one thumbnail away from curling up in a ball and hiding in a corner

K.Flagg

@lizardillo I think the new one makes more sense! Love this idea of the Bee character being the hero.

Valerie Light

@lizardillo This is awesome. You expressions and motion is great. Haven't you just gone from never before designing a character to nailing like 3 contests in a row? Looking forward to having you as a classmate in the cb pro class!

lizardillo

@Valerie-Light Thank you. I had never designed a human character, only not very stylised animals or birds. I can't draw people or faces. I had originally tried to make the character a boy or girl to try and force myself to create a stylised child, but one thing led to another it ended up as a bee! I think I'm destined never to draw humans.

This is Buzzbee's last adventure. He's retiring after this prompt.

Looking forward to CBP too, we're going to have fun. I still have no idea if children's books are for me but it's worth trying.

lizardillo

@K-Flagg thanks. I was originally trying to make it all about pre-event suspense, but hey, it's his last outing in the prompts so he can have some fun and go out with a bang!

lizardillo

After a few more rounds I've settle on this (give or take a few extra flowers, some size and positioning tweaks to try and make it read better and the foreground is a bit messy with too much stuff). I'm away at the weekend so I only have a few hours to do it between now and then. I messed about so much I've not left much time

Thanks everyone

lizardillo

The battle is going on in an idyllic english meadow a bit like the two hares in the top right pic (as we are encouraged to plant wildflowers in the UK to help the bees).

Sabrina Gosselin

Can I just say how I love that you shared your whole, and I mean, WHOLE process for this project? So awesome

brettb_draws

@lizardillo This is looking really nice so far! Besides the great character designs, I really love how clear your silhouettes are. I can already imagine how cool it's gonna look when it's coloured. Excited to see it when it's done !

lizardillo

Thank you all for all of the help this month. It’s truly appreciated. Here is the final. I’ve struggled a bit so it’s not quite how I wanted it in the end, I also lightened it a bit at the last minute and probably shouldn’t have. I’ve not done many full environments do this is a learning curve. Thanks once again.

I’m away in a campervan so hopefully this will upload from my phone.

Valerie Light

Your style is so cute and so consistent, @lizardillo . I like the way you're controlling value from foreground to background. You've done a great job of creating a narrative that builds as it moves back in space. Nice work!

ajillustrates

@lizardillo Dope to the nth-degree!